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AGE: 29
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 06

I’ve been writing poetry since I can remember, my first poems were published in a collection of my own called Let it be said when I was 18.Since then I’ve have been trying to develop my own voice-as believe it or not people do grow and change

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I studied your eyes I’ve seen your eyes bulge, Like a breast full of milk. They danced around loves vision, Rooting them to the tong it’s self. Loosening at your lovers mention Like a balloon slacking of its mount. Then I starred into his dull cloudy domes Pupils like yoke, Sliding around the thick stone plate of his face Waiting for electrodes to burst the gooeyness You sliver in. Blue /green/ icy pale stars. That empty their spheres of aqua’s, As if every word spoken, co...
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Poetry / Sallow
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   Sallow I've dragged my Colours, through chambers of the earth. Growing in the shadows of Seasons, Why sibling's seeds, cling to their roots, their nimbuses above a thorny bower. We are bound forever, by our oaks bed. Humble acorns- babe's of the Skyline. My skinny arms try to carry his face, But the first always steals the Grandeur- direct blood courses through its Veins. Yet ardent I am, to stand tall, catching the Sun. The golden clips lost on its first horizon. Pride persp...
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Poetry / basting
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Basting. For S Curtis Once our vapour breath, Channelled straggling shafts of light, Were mock curtains gaped. The floor was a rusting tin tide, of decadent hours. Embers, of a fire I once helped prolong. A bloodless abbituar for the coronas gaze, As the stench of skunk, Hid deaths odours for tow days, While you slept eternally in your chair. No external struggle though, Just a pool of plasma, a stained souls- knee jerk reaction. Kicking your spirit into the light. Murder was clear and pr...
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Poetry / Reunion
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A satire, of secrets unleashed. Gently flourishing into organic sincerer smiles. Moving us backwards through time, ghost hands entwined. Reliving feelings we had long forgot. I watched the language of your eyes unfold, Peeling back inner layers of a bud. I was again in your domed galaxy, starring straight back at me, time collapsed as are our lips touched. For a moment only lushness matters, closing eyes – to cut all ties. Unhinging windows to all possibilities, Fingers connect-blood mi...
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Poetry / Rent
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Here, have the earth under my nails. The pure azure, of my cracking lips. Take a spoon, to the witch hazel the delicacy of my eyes. I will even squeeze out, a clear-cut white diamond- A heart braking crown- to hang it on. I will take tweezers to my boredom, Like some would, a syringe to a poppy. I will let you digest the ore of my soul, for it speaks in tongues with yours, for a price of meal-for my beer to be refilled. Rent for my cracked ceiling, For my slab bed -for the souls on my boots. ...
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Poetry / A Poem
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Poetry / hallucination
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hey, First thing first, you really need to punctuate this, not that there is a lot to lose in it- but punctuation will help bring out, if I can say this its better side. As for the poem is it from the starker manual by any chance? I think the are a few problems with this poem, 1 subject matter doest really get going does it, and has the depth of a wheel nut.2 there are no lines of poetry in this-it is basically a thought you properly shouldn’t of had 3 reads really badly. So I suggest that yo...
Poetry / Similitude's
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