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AGE:
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LOC: Santa Maria, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 12
LOC: Santa Maria, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 12
I am just a down to earth person who like to express herself through writing so I hope you enjoy what I do and I f you do please let me know what I can do better.
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Tick, tock, tick, tock. Is the sound of the old grand father clock, As she sits on the porch over looking the docks. Waiting for a love that she once lost. Tick, tock, tick, tock. Is the sound of the old grand father clock. As she waits for a ship that never docks. Time winds down with every tick of the clock. There's a pain in her heart that never stops. Tick, tock, tick, tock Is the sound of the old grand father clock, As it rythmicly counts down her days. Slowly turning her jet b...
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Life isn't easy it's really quite hard. Learning what to keep and what to discard. The diffrence between what is real and what is fake. Should I give or should I take Life is a journey of great ups and downs. And to choose friends wisely for not all stay around. In the game of life there's really just two rules. Hope that you'er a teacher and pray you don't get schooled.
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I loved this poem. For the ver first line i could the love and pain of love gone wrong. They way you compared it to a rose was magnificent. keep up the good work.
IT was a nice poem. It didn't have much of a scheme or rhyme to it and some of the lines seemed to run a little long for example I held my eighty five year old mother in my hands and she weighed no more than one hundred pounds. I held my eighty five year old mother in my hands She weighed no more than one hundred pounds. That would help with the lay out keep writhing You have a good concept just polish it a little more.
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