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AGE: 34
LOC: Brazil
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 06

Im living in Itacaré, Bahia, Brazil and I write tales talk about xamanism and indians. This is my first history in english. I have more history in Spanish and Portuguese

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Short Story / Caburé
Version 2
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A becoming voice acts on the soul of things but no voice of all the ages is more powerful, nor more beautiful than the sound that blossomed from the flute of Caburé. Caburé lived in a land that brought cures and not destruction. He learned to touch his flute of bamboo, hearing the waterfall, the South Wind and the singing of the calm sea, while the days ran with the smoothness of a quick river. One song was born of such beauty that it seemed to have been made of enchanted dust, collected fro...
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Short Story / Sanumá
Version 1
61 Reviews   26 Comments
Sanuma, Flor do Sonho In a realm where bees loaded with nectar take their repose upon flowers everywhere, there never lived so pretty and fragrant a flower as Sanuma, who was known as Flor do Sonho, which means Flower of Dreams. She was beautiful and gracious like a great tree who opens her dense mantle of delicate leaves and offers her shelter and delicious fruit to all. An Indian whose beauty made other women seem vulgar, shaming the vanity of them all. Despite her prayers , Sanuma had nev...
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Poetry / A Final Kiss
I love this piece! I can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language, but I love a last metaphor, the way you finish a poetry! Congratulations! Keep writing! Aloha!
Journalism / Test
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Can I Just Say
I agree with you! I'm rookie in a English Language (I'm born in Brazil) and in this site I development a lot my poor English. And a lot times we don't have time to write and talk a lot of things and in Urbis this is possible, this is great! And we can meet new friends! Aloha my friend!
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Thoughts From France #1
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The Night My Father Met My Boyfriend
Nice piece. I'm young guy but I have two daughters and I believe try better with my sons in law. I can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language. Good story, keep writing! Aloha!
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