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AGE: 36
LOC: Brazil
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 31

Im living in Itacaré, Bahia, Brazil and I write tales talk about xamanism and indians. This is my first history in english. I have more history in Spanish and Portuguese

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Short Story / Caburé
Version 2
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A becoming voice acts on the soul of things but no voice of all the ages is more powerful, nor more beautiful than the sound that blossomed from the flute of Caburé. Caburé lived in a land that brought cures and not destruction. He learned to touch his flute of bamboo, hearing the waterfall, the South Wind and the singing of the calm sea, while the days ran with the smoothness of a quick river. One song was born of such beauty that it seemed to have been made of enchanted dust, collected fro...
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Short Story / Sanumá
Version 1
61 Reviews   29 Comments
Sanuma, Flor do Sonho In a realm where bees loaded with nectar take their repose upon flowers everywhere, there never lived so pretty and fragrant a flower as Sanuma, who was known as Flor do Sonho, which means Flower of Dreams. She was beautiful and gracious like a great tree who opens her dense mantle of delicate leaves and offers her shelter and delicious fruit to all. An Indian whose beauty made other women seem vulgar, shaming the vanity of them all. Despite her prayers , Sanuma had nev...
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Poetry / For My Love
I'm rokie in English language but I can feel like your poem sounds very good. Well writen have your own creative structure and nice flow. And, the most important:It's from the heart. Keep writing! Congratulations!
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Short Story / Dog Versus Snake
Very good story. I'm can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language, but I'm realy appreciatte the way you finish a story. Some slangs i can not understand, but your piece has a nice flow. Keep writing!
Journalism / Rockport Gem
Good writing! Good style and nice flow. I'm can not write about grammar because I'm rookie in English Language, But You make me curious to visit a Gallery, but unhappy I'm live far in Brazil. Nice tribute to artist.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / hobo tomb blues
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