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AGE: 32
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 23

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Number Seventy-Three Alfie Peter Gorman, supine and naked in the bath, lowered himself deeper until the water began to overflow; falling with a slap onto the cracked turquoise linoleum. It wasn’t especially late, perhaps ten thirty, maybe eleven. Alfie looked up from his prone position; his gaunt face framed by water, olive-tinged arms resting on his flat but not muscular abdomen, to the shelf above the bath where stood a two bar electric heater, plugged in via an extension cable in the livin...
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Non-fiction / six word memoir: my ex
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crazy stalker. won't stop. needs sorting
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Wedding dress. Never worn. Lucky escape?
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Non-fiction / Six word memoir
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Desperately unhappy. Leave wife. Have fun.
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Humor/Satire / SIX WORD MEMOIR
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As this is my first review I won't get bogged down with highlighting spelling or grammar issues. These can be dealt with when the story is finished. I think you have a great title. It catches the eye and is interesting. If you liken scrolling down the gallery page of Urbis to standing in a book shop and running your eyes across the shelves, which books do you pick up? The ones with titles which stand out or appeal to you in some way. I also like your opening paragraph. I hold an MA in Creativ...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Learned-Six Word Memoir
short and to the point. good
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