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AGE: 40
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 14

I am happily married with four children, and in october i became a grandmother.  

I am pleased to say my first book is out on 20th march 2008….........
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Prologue: Night-time It is the darkness I remember most of all. The darkness and the strangeness of it all. I am eight years old and lying in my bed. Mum and Dad are asleep. My brothers, Sean and Stuart are asleep. My little sister, Mandy, is asleep. All around me is pitch-black, and I am huddled under my covers hoping that they will protect me from the hidden terrors of the dark. Night-times have always been scary for me. Bad things happen at night. Things that shouldn’t happen. But tonight ...
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the lyrics are really quite powerful. It has been written really well, i cannot wait to hear it on myspace. thank you for sharing this. overall I loved it.
this was a very moving poem. the words flow well and is powerful
Poetry / For my Boy
the blend of words used in this poem for me are amazing, i read this four times and each time i liked it even more. overall I think this is a winner. jayne sterne
Poetry / The End
This poem is fantastic, the fact that it is based on truth made me cry, I could never understand what it must be like, but your words are incredibly powerful. My mind visualized scenes that horrified me, yet i am sure, its no where near what it must of been like seeing it for real. jayne sterne x
Poetry / As You Cry
This poem should touch the hearts of many, a powerful poem, and a strong picture in my mind through your words. I am left speechless at this amazing poem. your abilities to reach to the reader are commendable. well written, and very much publishable