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AGE: 28
LAST LOGIN: October 08

i enjoy writing and hope to be blessed by writing professionly

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Poetry / 6 word
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6 Reviews   2 Comments
Cant reed; nore right, how sadd?
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Poetry / Be My Wife
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2 Reviews   0 Comments
Words with many meanings mostly unsaid. One word… …you… You're my embrace at night, And my first morning thoughts. A gift from the Heavens. -one whom I adore- My blessing. My piece of mind. My lover. My friend. My wife one day. -and for that I am grateful- For God Himself hand crafted you my angel for me and I for you. What favor! What love has our father shown us! A gift for God again I say with great pride! And vow to you on this day And everyday after to display my love for you As God dis...
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The suicide of Sean Shit don’t make sense no more! I’m screaming. Nobody hears. Shit maybe them sorry asses are just deaf? No fuck that, MOTHERFUCKERS should be listening… … that’s what love is… … right? -Shit what is love?- An unclear, Half assed, Explanation is always given. That leaves me lost, lonely, still screaming. Hoping that with every symbol spoke an ear does its job, And just fucking listens! Shit can’t cry no more, My tears are all dried up. -Not funny!- I’m no joke! Can’t even lo...
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Poetry / YOU
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As I open me eyes, the darkness doesn`t leave. ...As the sweat from my nightmares cleanse me... And I arise in the birth of a new day, Alone and lost. ...silence hits... ...time stops... And like the sun you arise, and you brighten up my day. Your eyes, so sweet... ..they freeze me... and your dimples... ....they hold me... and your arms... ...they embrace me. Once alone, and lost... ...I am found in you
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Poetry / THE FIG EATERS
your on to something! loved it maybe try to loosen your wording to allow the reader to have more freedom with this piece. but that up to you.
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