it there more? I love cant wait to read more

butterflies wings your changing i get it i like!

profound and a thought everyone should have.i like

6 words are hard to get your point across you did it great job

i know this type of writing will always be brief in the fact it is right to the point. i like this but I feel like their are so much more to say that 6 words dont or cant say them.

I like very much I can relate!

your on to something! loved it maybe try to loosen your wording to allow the reader to have more freedom with this piece. but that up to you.