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"examples of shit you could just cook in the microwave" I don't mind curse words but somehow the use of the word shit when talking about food is kind of disgusting. "The pen is mightier than the sword" is a metonymy that was coined by Edward Bulwer-Lytton in 1839 for his play Richelieu. It means that history is influenced more by written words than by warfare and has absolutely nothing to do with actually fighting. This knowledge reneders your thought illogical. I do, however, like your idea ...

Amazing. This poem is just... beautiful.

I like the way that you compare the sunflower to God's presence. "Cause one thing the sunflower is certain of is, that it gets its strength from the SON!" This sentence is pure genius. I love it!

If that's a true story I offer my deepest sympathy. Very well written. I like that you left certain details to the reader's imagination. That was very tactful. Keep writing, I really like your writing style.