I don't give a rating of 10 very often but you did a kiss ass job. I don't smoke but after reading your work I understand how hard it might be to kick the habbit. Very witty. Oh, and the use of Jesus is a sure way to piss a few people off thus securing more attention to your work. Nicely done!

This poem needs a lot of work. It doesn't really have a nice flow and it didn't jerk any emotion out of me at all. The whole point of poetry is to make the reader feel what you're feeling and this piece failed to do that.

I want to be that girl who captured someone's heart like that. I really like this, it make me feel all warm and fuzzy. Too cute!

You used the word Press a lot with different meaning each time. This can get a little confusing. Keep strong in the faith and thanks for spreading His word.

I'm going to be honest, I don't get it. What exactly are you trying to convey here? And why is it called the sinner? Like I said, I don't get it.

If that's a true story I offer my deepest sympathy. Very well written. I like that you left certain details to the reader's imagination. That was very tactful. Keep writing, I really like your writing style.

I like the way that you compare the sunflower to God's presence. "Cause one thing the sunflower is certain of is, that it gets its strength from the SON!" This sentence is pure genius. I love it!

Amazing. This poem is just... beautiful.

"examples of shit you could just cook in the microwave" I don't mind curse words but somehow the use of the word shit when talking about food is kind of disgusting. "The pen is mightier than the sword" is a metonymy that was coined by Edward Bulwer-Lytton in 1839 for his play Richelieu. It means that history is influenced more by written words than by warfare and has absolutely nothing to do with actually fighting. This knowledge reneders your thought illogical. I do, however, like your idea ...