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LOC: Spring Lake, NJ
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i cradle you like a newborn child between two cupped hands and you seem to disappear like particles of sand into a trusting blue sky - only wishing i had time to say goodbye -
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I am lost in a world of silicon impressionism. Artists form beauty with sharpened knives. a foreign object injected in their bodies. A rape of humankind Why change true beauty for society's sake? The marks on my body took years to create, and they're mine not cloned or copied from perfect lines. In a world where art should imitate life, life imitates art and i stand miles apart from reality. i touch my beauty with nail bitten hand soft and natural scarred from demand - imperfect to your eyes ...
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short, sweet and to the point... the rhyming scheme is a bit confusing, there doesn't seem to be an order to it, the last line is supposed to rhyme with the first 2 and it does but it seems like its too far away from the first 2. maybe if you read it aloud you can see what i mean. overall a clear picture of the life of a duck..
good explanation of the eccentricity that your friend finus possesses... i hope that was what you were trying to get across with this poem...
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i think this poem addresses one of the biggest issues of our time and that is prescription drugs, esp. anti psychotic drugs and painkillers. it speaks to alot of people out there
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