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AGE: 43
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 22

Just your averagely depressed writer living in and loving London, UK – worked for years in TV, hoping to do so again, recently parted company with my Agent after 8 years and about to find a new one who’ll take my odd style of comedy and drama output onboard and just go with it…as the saying goes, all offers considered…in a literary sense, obviously.

Loving this site, talk about an eclectic mix of talents…

...btw: more about me, and others right here:

http://myweb.tiscali.co.uk/meanderings

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SCENE TWO: Darkness. There is a bath chair in front of the dining table. The baby's pram is gone. When the lights fade up they do so from behind, silhouetting the figure, hiding its face. From the snoring, it appears to be asleep. The snoring continues for a few moments punctuated with indecipherable murmurings. Then there is silence (for as long as the Actress and Audience can bear it). GRANDMOTHER (sudden, shrieking) What time is it? There is a throaty chuckle of amusement. GRANDMOTHER (cou...
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Stage Play / Gabrielle's Kitchen
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SCENE ONE: INT. GABRIELLE'S KITCHEN - NIGHT There is a dining table with a cordless telephone and a Baby Monitor on it. There are chairs around it. There is a baby's pram. GABRIELLE (O.S.) (sings, doleful) Hush little baby, don't say a word: mummy's gonna buy you a mocking bird. And if that mocking bird don't sing, mummy's gonna buy you a diamond ring. And if that diamond ring don't shine... Pause. GABRIELLE enters in a beautiful evening dress as though prepared for a night at the opera. She ...
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INT. WITTS END, CHURCH - NIGHT POV: we pan around to see there are three women, dressed in black, faces veiled, kneeling separately in their pews. Underscoring the scene is the music of Billie Holiday. MARCUS HARRISON SENIOR (V.O.) Saturday October the Eighth, Nineteen Sixty-Six... POV SWITCH: close-up on the statue of Christ in his agony on the cross above the altar, lit by amber candle-light. MARCUS HARRISON SENIOR (V.O.) ...my name is Doctor Marcus Harrison: Psychiatric Consultant. CUT TO:...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Witts End (Series 1. Pt 1)
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INT. WITTS END, CHURCH - NIGHT POV: we pan around to see there are three women, dressed in black, faces veiled, kneeling separately in their pews. Underscoring the scene is the music of Billie Holiday. MARCUS HARRISON SENIOR (V.O.) Saturday October the Eighth, Nineteen Sixty-Six... POV SWITCH: close-up on the statue of Christ in his agony on the cross above the altar, lit by amber candle-light. MARCUS HARRISON SENIOR (V.O.) ...my name is Doctor Marcus Harrison: Psychiatric Consultant. CUT TO:...
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Poetry / My Present
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What happened to the pen you gave me? It's odd but since I rang my way away and you just sat there: daring me to stay. I haven't seen my present: I've only seen my past and something close to a future that I'm terrified won't last. So now I'm writing late at night or morning: details no one cares about but you. Lying alone next door thinking we together are two. At night. In the dark. When the Vampires sing and the mortals park their cars, in the hope of no clamping: but once inside hope for ...
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Short Story / SuperGuy 3
Wow, you're creating a modern day morality fable here. I would never have plotted Hector's story running along these lines but I love it. You've combined the mythology of the Superhero secret identity device with the real world we live in seamlessly. This is an excellent antidote to the constant stream of "blockbuster" superhero movies, taking the concept and paring it back to what's real for today. I'd hang up the "short story" label and think seriously about opening this out into a fully-fl...
Short Story / With Me
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The first two lines are great: they're let down by the third and fourth line which required a little translation to understand how all four relate. This is clearly about (or inspired by) "9/11" and as such on a purely personal level tells us how you feel...that said, the subject matter shouldn't colour the fact that there is less of a wider appeal for readers in this piece as far as I can see. By that I mean that there is little on display that anyone, save those who masterminded the attack p...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / being in love
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Short Story / SuperGuy
I very much admire the set-up here...a potentially insignificant act of kindness that has all the hallmarks of rebounding back on poor, old Hector. This piece is a classic example of how the description of the mundane parts of life can be used to build up the suspense for what is it come. The characterisation of Hector is easy to absorb: his wife I presume will become more rounded as we go on but already we have a nice "Ladyhawk" sense of these two people not able to inhabit the same space an...
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