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AGE: 28
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 15

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Stage Play / Marigold - Scene Two
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Office Scene The scene opens on an empty office. Pippa enters DSL deposits some files on the desk and exits USR. Jim enters DSR looking cautiously around; once he sees that no one is around he breaks out into a big smile and visibly relaxes. He takes a seat at his desk and starts to thumb through the files on his desk. Pippa re-enters USR behind Jim, the audience should see Jim’s reaction to this, which is Playful and knowing. Jim: Mornin. (Checks his watch) What time do you call this? Pippa:...
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Short Story / Untitled Detective Story
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Columbo, Nero Wolfe, Hercule Poirot. Joe Mohan doesn’t watch shows like that anymore. Simply because to him their just ridiculous, far fetched works of fiction. Real Private detectives don’t have adventures like those guys do. There is in his opinion, very little personal glory to be had in his chosen profession, personal pride perhaps, or at least there used to be. Sat on his leather couch he fumbled for the T.V. remote, Peter Falk was listening intently to an aging Dance teacher ask with mo...
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Stage Play / Marigold - Scene Eight
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SCENE EIGHT Jim returns home from work, he put his bag on the table and goes over to Pippa who is lying on the couch watching television. The floor is littered with magazines, tissues and various other pieces of domestic rubbish. Jim has a look round and obviously disproves of the mess. Jimmy: Hi Pippa: Hi Jimmy: That was a long day, felt longer than it really was. He goes to kiss Pippa who reciprocates, the kiss seems to have passion but really it’s hollow, Jim unzips his pants and puts Pipp...
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Stage Play / Babysitting
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Short Story / Humour: Sin
I love it. Let me know if you decide to write the full musical.
Young Adult / Three Weeks Sober
Already I’m intrigued as to where this story is going, it's refreshing to see a story like yours with so many personal issues being dealt with without it become a One-man agenda driven diatribe about how hard and unfair the world is to a young gay man. It feels very real, and human so far. In short, I’d like to read more. Let me know if you post more pages!!
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