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AGE: 23
LOC: Canton, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 24

I write about anyhting and everything so my work is anything but consistent. I am trying to improve my writing as much as possible and the grammer is horrendous. I am learning though. Any input is appreciated because before now my only critic was my husband and he is a little bias. Thank you for reading.

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I joined this website like 2 years ago. I use to be heavy into it but I left for a while. When I came back I learned that I could pay to skip more people, have less credits to open stuff up, and my stuff would probably get in the queue more. Why did they start a paying profile anyway? This place was great. It has always promised people that agents and publishers get on here, but I have yet to see that happen with anyone. It was just a cool place where you could read, review, and submit. Now "...
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I too am caught in Myspace Hell. I understand what you are saying and where you are going. I loved the bit on slavery. although I will say that I sadly was talked into this by my husband. But he is the only one I own and I do anyway. Owning someone has another name, marraige! But I digress, the piece is funny for anyone who is a frequenter of Myspace. Those kooky kids on Facebook just wouldn't understand.
I understand exactly what you mean. I hate Oprah too. The bit on Cillian Murphy didn't have that great of a start, but you completely saved it with the whole police report that the Victim Viciously Beaten with Extremely Large, Erect Penis. I laughed my ass off on that one.
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I understand what you mean with this place. I love how people will ask me for a refund because I was overly critical. What the hell does that mean anyway? I am at least truthful. I had a person complain because my critique was to short for her "quote". What did she expect, an essay? Her spelling was fine and her grammar was fine for the one sentence she put down. And why is there so many people whom I have never even heard of wanting to improve a "personal saying" anyway. Sorry to rant, but I...
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How true.
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