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On a gray bleak morning, Eliza rose. She had decided to take over her husbands ship, whether or not the crew liked it. But it was taboo for a woman to be on board a pirate ship. So Eliza devised a plan to disguise herself as a man. She knew this was going to be a hard job, but was willing to take it on. She would do anything to keep Captain Blackheart from gaining her husbands ship. For years he has wanted this ship since it was in far better shape than his own, and had many more cannons! El...
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Unlikely Friends Herman began digging yet another hole in the ground. It seems this is what he was made for; bringing good rich soil up from below to the top! He busily kept up this tedious chore, never tiring. Going in the ground....coming back up a few minutes later. One day when he was busily digging; Sherman came along! Sherman stopped and watched Herman go down -then come back up. ' Hmmmmm,' Sherman thought. Herman was so busy he didn't notice Sherman was standing there. If that's what ...
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The Innocent One He quietly entered the room. With her eyes, she followed him as he walked across the floor. She kept silent, while everyone else greeted him with there hello's and how are you. Just then he looked her way, she coyly smiled. She was not ready to say hello to him yet. . As he talked with the guys, she watched him out of the corner of hers. He glanced her way, and she quickly diverted her eyes. She was having a hard time looking at him . She couldn't understand it; why now was ...
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Tatiana laid there in bed. She was glad to be alone, even though it had only been a day since Roger moved out. The last few days were sheer horror with him around. It was something she had been plotting for a while now, even though he was out of her place. It was inevitable- he had to die! But how? Where? When? This was something she needed to think about. A way to get rid of Roger, making sure she got away with it. Tatiana didn't want anything coming back on her. This was going to be very h...
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The Veil Veils? Just what are they? In our world there are many who are familiar with veils. Many could be made with different kinds of cloth. A new bride will wear one to cover her face, so when the time comes her husband can reveal his new wife. Then there are the middle eastern women that are required to wear a veil over their face, I assume out of respect. I still haven't quite understood why they have to wear them at all. Then in the western days, bank robbers wore a kind of a veil to h...
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The war? after months of training you're prepared to fight being shipped out now saying " we are right" to fight this war we have the right to kill alll terrorists from day to night Its gone on so long daily we hear the news as the battle cries are all but few some say its time to pull out now this war we fight is " wrong" somehow many men of ours have lost their life lost a limb, blown away or live with strife this thing called war its always been one part of humanity now will it ever be do...
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I want to cry no tears will come to be sad or mad yet all I feel is I'm glad happy that in my life I have been a part of yours to give you some love where none was found to be there for you when the day is done as you turn out the lights to have someone to hold never expecting anything more than your love some kind, loving words with a hug or two I still hope and pray that I can be your someone to love and care for you
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Our Time They were mine to share with you Gently brushing with my own A slow glide down the front of your soft skin loving, caressing a look, the feel no words spoken wanting , needing our bodies to be fed my body reacts submitting easily as you guide me to wondrous lands time we need time we have sharing our love with only each other.
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Darkness the darkness surrounds me unknowing-what is coming? I venture forth slowly creeping I see a vague light far off on the horizon what will be there could anything be found? a sound, a cry what is that? a reflection of myself is that my conscience? the unknown is there making me nervous, scared yet I keep going needing to find something I am there but where is here? am I alone or are you with me something tells me to keep going keep waiting someday you will find peace!
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TIMES The time's not right for love I guess yet we shared some precious moments I dared to love giving my heart sharing my soul with only you Should I be sad or even mad can I or will I be forever with you? You never promised but always hoping we would be together sharing intimate moments! The tears began to fall no one is here to catch them a hug is what I want and a tender kiss I long to see you to feel you my love, my honey forever more!
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