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21
LOC: Cedar Rapids, IA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 24
LOC: Cedar Rapids, IA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 24
Wow, this kind of question is probably the hardest thing in the world to answer. I really don’t look into myself so much that I know what to write in these “About Me”/”Biography” type things. I guess you could say I like to write, of course, that is why I joined this site in the first place. I value friendships more than anything in the world and I would do anything for anyone that I loved. I haven’t been writing very long. Only since the 8th grade. Well when I say I haven’t been writing I mean that I haven’t been interested in it, since the 8th grade. I hear all the time how amazing I am…blah blah blah, but I really wish I could find someone who will tell me I’m not that good so I can actually improve, because I know I need to.
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Girl One age 16-18;
Girl Two age 16-18 (Curtain) Stage is empty except for two girls sitting on a couch. A stack of papers and a rug are on the floor. Girl One is on a laptop computer and Girl Two is reading a book. They are sitting on opposite ends of the couch. Both of them have their feet on the couch facing each other. A faint ticking of a clock can be heard in the background. Girl One: (typing. makes a scrunched face and hits a button multiple times. (del...
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I rested one hand on the steering wheel as I gazed out at the rising sun. Maybe Jade was looking out her window at the same sight. She always mentioned to me how she never sat and watched the sun rise or set. I hoped the trip would give us a chance to do just that. My cellphone vibrated in my right pocket. It was my mom. "Ma, I just left 5 minutes ago." "I know, sweetheart. I was just making sure you have the directions to the hotel in Salt Lake City." "You gave...
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I clasped my hand over the cold doorknob and turned it. A rush of cold air hit my face as I took a step out onto the porch. The old wood creaked under my weight. I stepped down turning right, looking south toward the bridge. Strands of hair whipped my face. I pulled my hood up, stopping the chaotic movement. Shoving my hands into the pocket of my hoodie, my eyes wandered from the earth to the world in front of me revealing that I was only one block away. Not that I had traveled far anyway. T...
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My eyes were closed as the wind whipped the strands of my dark coarse hair across the side of my face. I winced slightly, each time, as the hairs snapped against my skin. The cold air of the wind seemed to cool down my injuries, with it’s soothing blows, but just as my face would start to feel better, the wind would give a fierce howl and whip the hairs harder than it had before. I stood barefoot, the rough cement digging into the soles of my feet. Cars slowed as they drove past, watching me...
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I'm not quite sure this is my style, but it was very impressive otherwise. I guess I found it to be to vulgar and unusual. I also didn't really understand it. I'm just not very good at interpeting poetry. But anyways. Grammatically it's written very well. Your stanzas are seperated well. The flow doesn't seem wrong either. I think its a very well written poem. Good luck. =)
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omgosh! how sad!! you are continuing this arent you? i'm definitely going to have to add you as a friend so i can read your next ones!! but i did have one issue. I cannot for the life of me understand this sentence: Torn, seeping hands pulled Kimaal two rotten tree corpses. Call me stupid. Lol. but i just can't doit!! I hope to read more! I really like the way you are developing Kimaal. Her character is very intriuging. And at the end, how us as a read gets a taste of whats going on...LOVED I...
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I really enjoyed this. It was humorous and a very interesting read. But there were A LOT of typos. So I'd suggest looking over it and making sure everything is peachy keen. Good job though!
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