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AGE: 31
LOC: Franklin, TN
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 27

Ok I am going to say this one so everyone knows and understands it. I am a free verse poet and ryming is not as important to me as symbolism and meaning. As for anything else about my works they are as far from conventional as possible. Nothing anyone has to say about anything I write will hurt or offend me unless it is just plain stupid. So with that in mind review away.

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Poetry / The Prize
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The Prize Love is a thing of hate and splendor that clings to your soul. Latching on and never letting go till you earn its embrace. Or it suffocates you as you drown underneath its weight. Love is foolish love is strange it is a mystery that can’t be explained. A fools errand and a knights reward a tool for evil to misuse. It misguides and misleads turning all the water muddy and unclear. A stain inside the looking glass that makes all things uncertain. The poets cry out for it and yet never...
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Poetry / The Prize
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The Prize Love is a thing of hate and splendor That clings to your soul. Latching on and never letting go Till you earn its embrace. Or it suffocates you as you drown Underneath its weight. Love is foolish love is strange it is a mystery that can't be explained. A fools errand and a knights reward A tool for evil to misuse. It misguides and misleads turning All the water muddy and unclear. A stain inside the looking glass that Makes all things uncertain. The poets cry out for it and Yet never...
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A Picture In My Mind A picture in my mind of what love is to me. A tiny little picture in a wooden frame sitting in my mind. What is the picture of? that is what you would ask of me. Is it some love long since dead and gone from my life? No I would have to say that I have long since moved on. There’s nothing more left to cling to in that past life. Could it be someone close to me that has given me new life. No she left me long ago to the fate I now endure. Besides I would not want to let her ...
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Poetry / The Introvert
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The Introvert I ain't nothing but an introvert shouted out the extrovert from a building up on high. That's the last thought I had of her before She died. She's that silent whisper in your ear that Seems to shout out to the night air. What more could she have said that Would have made her not disappear? Could I have heard a little more of the Quiet roaring of her soul? I mean what is wrong with being a silent extrovert That just happens to be a loud introvert? Is there some cosmic reason behi...
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Poetry / Maze of her Mind
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Maze of Her Mind A world of wonder all in a single mind. Some perfect mind that I find myself drawn to like a moth to a flame. Her splendid mind filled with all the wonders that make me love her. Yet there is always something more to her then just her mind. A way she looks at me with her loving eyes they see right through me. And as she stands there staring at me I find myself held within that gaze. But could it be that there is so much more to her? A simple thing that becomes so complex tha...
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Poetry / Immersion
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WOW the thoughts that this invoked and provoked were amazing. I love the concept and it is really well thought and laied out. I feel wiser just for having read it. This short story feels all at once to be the ramblings of a mad man and a perfectly logical debate that could really happen. Keep up the great work!!
I just felt that the writing was poorly done. The characters are bland and dry and the whole story feels rushed. The kids playing with lego's was a little abstract and I really feel that more back story or insite needs to be added for you to feel the relationships of the childern. I feel like there is alot more to tell here and that if flushed out a little more this could be a great story.
This is abstract yet powerful. I found myself conjuring up thoughts an feelings of my own past discontent. Quite an interesting poem
Poetry / LYRICAL TETRIS
I mostly feel that rhyming is over rated these days. Expression should advance over time as the new and old mesh. But, I found myself really enjoying this work. The rhyme is well done and never trite. And, like Maxwell house always said I found this good to the last drop. Thank you for a great poem.