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AGE:
34
LOC: Baton Rouge, LA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 20
LOC: Baton Rouge, LA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 20
33 yr. old female from Louisiana. Haven’t written in a while due to injuries from a car wreck but I hope to just push past it and add some more. In the mean time I’m gonna start reading and reading to motivate me. Thanks for reading my stuff and any and all reviews are appreciated.
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One Way Street Time passes by like those nights Spent staring at the ceiling Wishing I could stop MY heart from feeling. So here I go again, Back to an old friend… A dirty one way street. Has anybody round here Seen or heard Blake’s Angels in the trees? Through a cloud of smoke, An old man said to me, Darlin' if that’s what you’re lookin' for This ain’t the place to be. Outside, the cold wind blows And everybody down here knows, The bell tower chimes for me.
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Before you come any closer, stranger, There are a few things that I must say. The world surrounds me with its pain... I see the anger I hear the cries. Predator and Prey. And which one am I? I am Predator. A rabid cur, staring at the moon. If you could see inside, poor stranger, Then you would know the danger. Inside of me dwells murder. But still... Let me go a little further. I am Prey as well, For inside, love also dwells. In my heart, there is trust. You may come now closer, stranger, If ...
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Before you come any closer, stranger, There are a few things that I must say. The world surrounds me with its pain... I see the anger I hear the cries. Predator and Prey. And which one am I? I am Predator. A rabid cur, staring at the moon. If you could see inside, poor stranger, Then you would know the danger. Inside of me dwells murder. But still... Let me go a little further. I am Prey as well, For inside, love also dwells. In my heart, there is trust. You may come now closer, stranger, If ...
Version 1
5 Reviews
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One Way Street Time passes by like those nights Spent staring at the ceiling Wishing you could stop Your heart from feeling. So here I go again, Back to an old friend… A dirty one way street. Has anybody round here Seen or heard Blake’s Angels in the trees? Through a cloud of smoke, An old man said to me, Darlin if that’s what you’re lookin for This ain’t the place to be. Outside the cold wind blows And everybody down here knows The bell tower chimes for me.
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I placed a jar in Tennessee, with all the gifts you'd given me, on a winding mountain road. Seven years spent by your side, as loving friend and loving lover. I stood my ground with nothing to hide and waited for you to come. Strong and clear, yet made of glass, I was this jar that held your memories. And you, my friend, my love, always roaring and tearing through the ups and downs before you struggling and dull, yet made of steel, you were the semi that crushed the jar that held your memorie...
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A very good start. You need to check your spelling and also, since there is a great deal of movement withing your sentences, you might want to think of breaking them up along with the movement. good luck
I like it and I understand it; it just seems sort of plain. I should think you would want something to stand out and thats a sentence(in essence) that we've all heard or used at some time. For some reason, the word "bare" could maybe be rethought???? good luck
That was awesome!!! I loved it. Subject matter, line rhythm, flow you have it down. I'm going to add this as one of my favorites!
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