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AGE: 17
LOC: Puyallup, WA
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The Albert Camus Workout Plan It wasn’t until the man with greasy hair fell off the cherry picker that Ilsa decided to lose twenty-seven pounds the old fashioned way. Her options otherwise had been scarce anyhow; judging by fourth period’s Eating Disorder Word Find, bulimia was icky and anorexia just seemed to suck the fun out of it all. He died on the free-throw line, neck snapped. The youth basketball teams on the other side of the divided court were too absorbed in their game to hear the t...
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La vita non grata, The myth of stigmata, The staggering state of existence, I was searching my mind In an effort to find An excuse, The sole truth, To my being. La vita non grata, The things that I thought of, Through sermons and lectures in closed rooms, I tore up the seams To the suburban dream, And I let the bureaucrats have it. La vita non grata, My old alma matter, The trails and the paths that I've taken, When it's cash that we lack, We all come crawling back. Nothing is free when you'r...
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La vita non grata, The myth of stigmata, The staggering state of existence, I was searching my mind In an effort to find An excuse, The sole truth, To my being. La vita non grata, The things that I thought of, While man preached away on his high horse, I tore up the seams To the suburban dream, And I let the bureaucrats have it. La vita non grata, My old alma matter, The trails and the paths that I've taken, When it's cash that we lack, We all come crawling back. Nothing is free when you're b...
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La vita non grata, The myth of stigmata, The staggering state of existence, I was searching my mind In an effort to find An excuse, The soul truth To my being. La vita non grata, The things that I thought of, While man preached away on his high horse, I tore up the seams To the suburban dream, And I let the bureaucrats have it. La vita non grata, My old alma matter, The trails and the paths that I've taken, When it's cash that we lack, We all come crawling back, Nothing is free when you're br...
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Poetry / Cancelled
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Poetry / Reality Biter
There's a lot of words in there for so few lines, I would either divide them up or just expand.
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It seems you're in touch enough with your subject to have included more detail than written to create a more engrossing read. But for being scarce it worked. Did that make any sense at all? Hopefully. Insanity's a fun one, don't skimp on it!
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Poetry / Journey
I like the flow of this piece. If there was a meaning to be extracted from it then in that I failed but it's enjoyable on its own anyway.
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