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The rose may just be a flower, but to other people it''s a sign, a sign of "love" and "togetherness." But as time roles by, it becomes a sign of "sorrow" and "grief," of the many of those who have passed, or of those who are coming to pass. For I have seen many times, this single red rose turn, to a single black rose, "Although I walk in the shadow of death, I will fear no evil for God is with me."
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By the time I had dumped Darius's body and got back to my room, Alexander and Joan had already packed up my room and left. They left a note. Adria, I know you'll miss it here. But it's best that we leave. The Agony's don't belong here anymore. I suppose that you have gone to say your final farewell. But please take care, also please be on your way as soon as you get this. With Immortal Love, Alexander & Joan Without second thought I crumpled the paper up and threw it across the room. I flew m...
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My name is Adria, Adria Agony to be exact. I guess you should know that I’m not one of those regular girls you’ll find. See, I was born in Romania to the La Mona family bloodline, my family kept their secret under wraps, but when my father was born a hundred percent human that changed the course of the future my ancestors had so greatly worked for. That was until my father, Alexander, met my mother, Joan. Her family was also from Romania and also from an ancient vampire bloodline. They were m...
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When life is over, Where will we go then? When death rules everything, Will we miss what life was back then? Will the chill in our bones remain? With the slow stabs to our hearts. The penetration to the pain, Eating us alive but it will always stay the same. Killing us inside out, Slowly eating it’s way, To our subconscious state of mind. There it rules, Our entire body. Until it’s insane twisted ways, Kill us with the shock. There our haters and betrayers, Will be happy for they have killed ...
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I don’t want to look in the mirror To afraid of what I would see. My chest caving in by starving, Only trying to fit in. Chorus It was a big mistake. Push till I can’t quite take it anymore. I feel turned out So deaf and blind That I can’t be my own self That sudden shade of crimson That you spread on your full lips Now kiss me baby Bring back sin And let me keep it in my flesh To pick at my own scabs till I am bleeding Chorus And down to the depths And the bottom of my empty memory To afraid...
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I like this a lot. But what did the man with the bloody hands do? i know that probably to you seems stupid to ask but i really don't know. But you are right we shouldn't be putting people down or making fun of them but cherishing them as people and understand that they might save humanity one little step at a time. Every human has feelings no matter how strange their ethnicity is to us. Good job my friend. It's really touching. Keep up the work i'll be waiting to see more.
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I like this. I like how it's written so that it's like they're almost whispering and they're talking as a secret. Good job on all the allusions. wonderful absolutely wonderful. Good job. Bravo. Keep up the work!! Katelin
ummm.... i'm a little confused quite honestly... i know what your trying to get across that their your hero and your theirs but it really doesn't flow quite well.. but the message is nice. it just seems a little choppy. let me know what you change if you do change anything. it's still good. Please keep up the good work always. Katelin
this is such a good chapter. you really did a good job! you could be a little more descriptive but it's still really good. you did good on describing her hesitation as well. Katelin
i like this a lot. it shows all the heartache and how people feel like they are falling with no way out. i like it alot. i've been this way a couple of times i bet it's touched more than just me. But there is something about the 2nd verse "You kept knockin me down you’d hold me at arms length fight each attempt of my love until you made me break" that just doesn't "click". i just doesn't seem to fit too well. you might want to revise that but other than that... it's a great way how you used t...
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