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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 19
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GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 19
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Where are you Kimmy please come home? You left lil Abby all alone, At least give me a call on the telephone Explain this to her on your own cuz i don't know what to say to make things right or put things in a positive light Just say the word and I'll make her mine And we will live our life just fine Just give me something to tell her broken lil heart The reason that momma wants to live apart She's only three she won't understand luckily i'm here to lend a helping hand what did she do to eve...
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It had great detail and imagary.She lavishly wraps in wealth This romance kept in stealth, I love these lines they are great . Great imagary in this next set of lines. As the sun shares the sky She was the cat who plays Toying with the little mouse
The poem seems more like a letter then a poem. I find it interesting how u used the same word and it flowed pretty well. It had a good rhythm.Overall it was good.
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