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Haiku/Senryu / Oceana
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Morning has broken is what we call one circle of our mother earth
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Non-fiction / Essay-Personal
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Raised in southern Georgia by a struggling single parent I resided in predominantly black neighborhoods and attended predominately black schools. In fact, in grades 3-5, my sister and I attended classes as the only white minorities in our homeroom classes. Unfortunately, I was also a shy, nerdy white girl who didn’t retort back and was viewed as snobby, this lead to being basically ignored or teased and occasional actually physically attacked. My sister and I would walk home together as quick...
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Non-fiction / Journal Essay
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"After the Egyptian and Indian, the Greek and Roman, the Teuton and Mongolian, the Negro is a sort of seventh son, born with a veil, and gifted with second-sight in this American world, --a world which yields him no true self-consciousness, but only lets him see himself through the revelation of the other world.” (Dubois) This quote caught my attention because I am curious about the “second-sight” found in America that removes a veil that the “..Negro..” is born with. Is Dubois referring to ...
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Woman of Valor: Margaret Sanger and The Birth Control Movement in America, written by Ellen Chesler, does not present a simplistic view of neither the Birth Control Movement in the United States of American nor its leadership by the “quixotic” Margaret Sanger (12). Instead, Ellen Chesler utilizes the breadth of correspondence and journals , Sanger herself carefully “preserved”(17), to present both Margaret Sanger’s private and political life as major influences of her seemingly singular obses...
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Non-fiction / Essay- Political Cartoon
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The Harper’s illustration, “The First Vote”, is a perfect example of the “…great propaganda campaign… (Slavery Emancipation 199)” to allow white America to perpetuate the myth that black inferiority not white intimidation led to the African American’s political disenfranchisement at the end of the 19th Century. This illustration supports the then popular Northern conception that the Civil War had brought “freedom” to African Americans who were modestly thankful and ready to fall into line, so...
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Short Story / At The Top Of The World
This is an intense and gripping short story. The actions of inanimate objects abound in this piece serving to allow the reader to experience the surrealness of the story. However a cliche caught my attention..."carressed like a lover" maybe you should consider a different simile for the furniture's fine finesse and confort.
Short Story / White Lies
This character piece reveals one of Nikolas's major motivations, revealing that most of his actions will be a reflection of his indoctrination as a child through words and corporal punishment to cynically believe that lying is an inescapable part of a painful life. Great work!
Poetry / Demons
line 4 ... 'it takes control quick and hard"....instead this is more in keeping with the rythym of the poem..
Non-fiction / Learning from Nature?
This peice does a good job proving its thesis. However some stylistic and grammatical editting is recommended.
Non-fiction / To Date or Not to Date
interesting.. definetly touches on many sensitive emotions of conflicting natures...
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