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AGE: 23
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 10

A streaming vacuum of pandemonius imput, joining the predecessing mass, growing; no, not in size, but in intensity, in range, in subtlety.

The promise of an impending explosion of terrible truth, comprehensive, cohesive, spherical in nature so as to cover all angles.

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Short Story / Entry 113
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Sometimes I get confused how I should wear my face. I’m totally normal, there’s nothing “special” about me. I’ve been in and out of love like most people have; I’ve grasped at things and have had them slip away, like most people do. I’m fine in every way except that (and this is totally backwards) since high school ended I’ve started to feel that my life is winding down. I had an idea of what the future would be like, like most people my age do, and it was a painfully good idea; I nurtured th...
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Lyrics / Circles
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I thought I knew better. Like a child shaken from sleep his eyes open, look both ways and tell him it's not safe to wake up. Reality is too bright today. Today I'll live instead In a mezmerizing shadow puppet show Somewhere behind my eyelids. Because life is a balancing act. We are the fulcrum of the empirical and the ambitious. We are an uneasy truce of contentment and desire. After nightfall our borders aren't safe. We are given a grey jersey When the teams are black and white. We are a one...
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Poetry / Entry 113
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Sometimes I get confused how I should wear my face. I’m totally normal, there’s nothing “special” about me. I’ve been in and out of love like most people have; I’ve grasped at things and have had them slip away, like most people do. I’m fine in every way except that (and this is totally backwards) since high school ended I’ve started to feel that my life is winding down. I had an idea of what the future would be like, like most people my age do, and it was a painfully good idea; I nurtured th...
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Short Story / Entry 113
Version 1
8 Reviews   0 Comments
Sometimes I get confused how I should wear my face. I'm totally normal, there's nothing "special" about me. I've been in and out of love like most people have; I've grasped at things and have had them slip away, like most people do. I'm fine in every way except that (and this is totally backwards) since high school ended I've started to feel that my life is winding down. I had an idea of what the future would be like, like most people my age do, and it was a painfully good idea; I nurtured th...
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Someone has watched Blade-Runner.
Poetry / missing
Simple and powerful. Maybe it's not "who can write", but who has something to say. Plus, dammit, I love John Sherwood.
Poetry / B-Rad
I completely dig it. It is so John Sherwood. And I miss this time.
Poetry / Shit Happens
This stanza seemed a little unclear, it seemed like you wanted to convey the imposing feeling the church can give off but I couldn't quite feel it: "This is the steeple A temple closed off At the tip of the spire Gives a modest man Something to fear" Also, was the last word intended to be "duped"? NIce musing, I may not agree with you but it's well written. Happy writing in the future.
Poetry / Tuesday
A very realistic recounting of shit that went down. But... so dramatic, It's a bit too much to be good for the general public. The most intimate stuff is not always good to write. I think that sometimes peoplewrite too much of thier personal feelings, and I feel that that's what's happened here. Good for personal reflection, not insightful enough for other people.