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AGE: 43
LOC: Boyden, IA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 02

I am a published author (“The Other-the autobiography of the life and legend of Lucifer” AmErickaHouse, 2001).

I am a journalist who has worked as a reporter and freelancer for major metropolitan newspapers such as the Peoria Journal-Star, the Daily Herald newspapers of suburban Chicago and The Chicago Tribune.

I also have 15 years IT consulting experience, including network administration, web design, network security and more.

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Waters of your love I have felt the waters of your love They wash over me They ease my heart and my soul The gentle waves of pleasure Caressing my body with delight I have gazed at the clouds of your creativity As I bask in the waters of your love The clouds creating beautiful and mysterious Paintings in the sky Divine inspiration is shared I have listened to the sounds From the waves of your love As you fill my ears with Music of nature and beauty And make alive all my senses The gentle wi...
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Sorry Doesn't Matter Any More by Kevin P Gunderman Without beauty, Without grace, We make mistakes And it's a shame A real disgrace When love gets twisted And judgements get scewed The hurt is real The trust is misused We deny And we blame But once it happens Things are never the same And sometimes Sorry doesn't matter anymore Sometimes the hurt is too deep Or the timing is too late And it fades away, A love turned to hate When they are dead and gone Or the hurt is too strong We can't take it...
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I wore a wedding band for twenty years too little laughter too many tears What started out as love Got lost in the hate Twisting and bending Reversing the fate You try to hope And you try to cling Praying to rekindle The dieing fling You blame her And she blames you Neither can deal With what is really true Whether it was true Or just a mistake It doesn't really matter When it ends in heart break A beautiful gift Designed for two Meant for eterninty It eventually withdrew When all things are ...
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There's somebody out there Somebody for me Don't know what she looks like Or where she might be Alone in the darkness I search every night Trying to find her But she's nowhere in sight I know there's somebody out there Someone who wants me Someone to care for Someone to set me free Somebody knows her And where she might be Would somebody out there Please bring her to me Arms so tender Lips so sweet Dieing to hold her Can't wait 'til we might Alone for so long I cry every night I know this is ...
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Face of an angel Eyes so blue Hair so gold Heart so true A name like heaven A wit so quick It's hard to define Exquisted beauty Naked r dressed If in pain, yu're hearet will mend Whether she's your lover Or merely a friend Once you've met her Heard the words she speaks You'll never forget her Or the truth she speaks She'll see through your soul As if it were glass And treat you with kindness And a touch of class She'll open her arms and her heart For the art of love Is her true art
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Novel Treatments / An Alligence to Darkness
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This is not a bad piece. However, there are too many sentences that start with "although" or "but" or are just not complete sentences at all. You also say she stitch up your "scare" instead of "scar" and there are similar missed edits. Again, the overall story is not bad, but much more editing and work on sentence structure needs to be done.
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Short Story / The Janitor
This is an outstanding and well written piece of work. You have taken a ery creative and quirlky topic and brought it to life in a very saisfactory way. There are times when some of the repetitions seem mildly bothersome, but overall, this is very well done. Keep up the good work. Your talent is quite obvious.