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i do not claim to be a prophet or anything along the lines of foretelling the future..... what i will claim is that i belive that i have the gift of explaining the things in this world most of us pay no attention to because we can't see them with the naked eye...... for the moment i am nothing but a mediator relaying information and situations that have already taken place in the ongoing battle above us..... let me better explain.... i used to write alot about evil things such as demons overt...
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lurking beneath my darkest hour lies my brightest fear blinding my choices with sins sandpaper scraping away delightful dreams never to escape from my pen that now leaks ligneous tears instead of faithfilled words of wisdom that at one time set a fire of hope into handcrafted hearts BeaTInG to the beautiful rhythym of blindfolded blessings but now has somehow seemed to slip into a sinister SOULSNARE trapping my thoughts within timeless tapestries made from tinsel teardrops torn from temptatio...
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can you feel my tears? they continue to fall and stain my lonely path leaving a trail of smiles in case you were wondering where i am do you sense my presence? as my heart beats a distress call in morse code that becomes more distinct the closer our unpaved roads come to crossing it all becomes clearer in my dreams your face (so entrancing) your touch (so electric) your smell (so invigorating) you are the greatest aphrodesiac our neverending stroll on inviting clouds brushing wings along side...
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i can sense your atrocious ulterior motives as you cut me some slack while i tip toe across this tightrope plucking newborn stars from the satin sky then taking my time eating them with the intention to light up my life eventually becoming a guide scouring around uncharted dreams in search of certain individuals capable of helping me as much as i help them as we journey through thick fog and thin air in hopes of recovering treasure stolen by evil scorcerers waving wands aimlessly as they ride...
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misted swirls of frozen time gather breaths of carbon-copied memories melting in Moonlit moments of Sunflaked smiles doused in Daymended kisses from broken hearts beating o/f/f-t/e/m/p/o to the choir of whistling wind serenading burnt-out stars staring gracefully at grace T.w.I.n.K.l.I.n.G W b I e N h D i O n W d S to the soul streaked with tears of love surrendered from evaporating icicles of sin that at one point blocked views of blinding faith blinking beauty only heard in silent sight of ...
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this has a great feeling to it... magnificent wordplay and the wordmeld "wanderlust" is an awesome unification.... this is short... but definitely to the point.... not to mention the ending is just extravagent.... "in the shadow of painted moons"... correct me if i'm wrong... but... shouldn't it be "in the shadows"... not many flaws in this piece and if this person can catch my attention so easily with other writes as they have done in this piece i will most definitely be reading more of this...
my hats off to you for this inspirational poem full deep and beautiful meanings.... the quotes really brought this piece to full life.... not saying that without them this would be dead.... but it really added to the meaning... this just goes to show you that still to this day in age we can go back to the past and ressurect new meanings and philosophies based on others works.... it makes us never forget how much we have grown as humans in our thought processes... i immensely enjoyed this piec...
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this is an extremely well written poem in so many ways.... the wordplay is magnificent and takes my mind on a journey only this author could do... "Work the lather of times forgotten; stress the soapsuds out of the moldy bathtub." beautiful metaphore expressed with great passion... "Begotten of nothing, yet grown from sun, the newborn sunflower sparks a flurry of rejoices." another great perspective as to where we all come from.... this writer is proficient in describing their inner visions a...
this sent me into deep thought.... which is awesome because i love to think... without being to analytical this is an extrememly well written display of emotions playing with words..... in the stanza "words were created for humans" i really found to be an exceptional analogy that hits the bulls eye directly in the center... like a shot Robin Hood could make with his eyes closed..... everything about this IS PROFOUND and the ending summed this up very well... i appreciate what you have unselfi...
i enjoyed rading this because i know exactly what you mean because i am in love with someone dearly..... it's short and to the point with great alliteration..... "Love. How simple,how complex" very true.... i especially loved (no pun intended) how you summed it up..... beautiful write.....
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