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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / How to cure your hiccups without using a gun
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BOGOTA, Colombia—(AP) A Colombian man who tried to startle his nephew from a bout of the hiccups by pointing a gun at him accidentally pulled the trigger and killed him. Police in the northern city of Barranquilla said the distraught uncle then ran out of the house and down the street a few yards before stopping and shooting himself. He died from a gunshot wound in the head. According to police, the incident occurred Sunday night after the two men had been drinking. ————————...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Using OJ Logic
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Well for those of you living under a rock OJ Simpson has a new book coming out about the murders he didn’t commit. Here is a little snippet from the AP wire story: "O.J. Simpson, in his own words, tells for the first time how he would have committed the murders if he were the one responsible for the crimes," the network said in a statement. "In the two-part event, Simpson describes how he would have carried out the murders he has vehemently denied committing for over a decade." I love this ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The Most Romantic Quote Ever
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Back when I was living in Albany I had a period where all my friends graduated and moved out of the area, they were all juniors and seniors when I was a freshman so it was to be expected. I began to make some friends with people that I was working with at the illustrious office supply store Staples. Slowly I became part of a group that included two of my co-workers and their local friends. In this group they have a guy name Nate that hung out with them. Nate was the guy that caught shit all t...
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Today I am going to break down a topic that has bugged me for years: Women giving men handjobs. Before I get into this subject I would like to first give a couple of exceptions to what I am about to say. 1) If you are 17 or under and haven't had sex yet handjobs are ok. 2) If you are flogging your man's bishop while doing a little suckie suckie... it is ok. 3) If you are on a first or second date and things were getting passionate but you just don't want to go that far... it is ok. 4) Strippe...
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So wait tom cruise really didn't eat your baby? I am confused. People have issues reading into things too much and not being able to either take a joke our understand a metaphor. It's even harder trying to convey that over the net.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Miracle on Dirty Fourth Street-chapter 9
I really enjoyed this, the structure was good, the dialogs were interesting. My favorite paragraph was about the old couple sitting around coughing up mucus while trying to light up cigarette after cigarette. This is something I would be interested in reading more of, the advancement out of the working class and into something more.
I have to say this idea is really creative and the execution was great. This concept is original and I think you made it work. One question I have is: Is your capitalization intentional on some of the words and phrases? I can see it with the Honey, Honey but for some other things it just seems random. I don't know if is intentional or perhaps just a slip up.
Children's / Anne Again
I laughed really hard at the instructions: "You will either love or hate the repetition. However, I think it’s there to stay. At least it is for today. " Did you do that intentionally? As for the piece itself if works in it's simplicity. The rhyme structure is fine.
Lyrics / Humpty Dumpty
I am not a big fan of doing a song based of a nursery rhyme. I do think it is cliched, although you did a good job with it. I do like the phrase: "you’d hold me at arms length fight each attempt of my love until you made me break" But the whole nursery rhyme thing kind of ruins some of the good lines you have in there. You maybe able to refer to humpty dumpty but I think you rely to heavily on the nursery rhyme
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