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AGE: 24
LOC: Colonia, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 28

Well I’ve been writing for years now but mostly for my own amusement and that of my friends. Aside from that I’m incredibly goofy. A bit of an adventurer. I try not to take life too seriously. I work with horses, which is awesome.  Thats about all i suppose!

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / As The Illusion Dies
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 you are a leech of the undergrowth your words like candy to your prey luring them in before you make your attack the actions are premeditated planned according to your victims weakness and carefully executed as to draw no attention from the mere onlookers and if one should be so wise to question your actions the toxins spewed from your lips will defer the thoughts continuing on to your prey, having an ease to console and manipulate take them under your wing fix their world and take the...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The Villain I Was Born to Be
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  I have come into your mind and ripped it apart Whatever little was left of your nonexistent life I have ruined Not my intentions, bit it should have been You have chosen to forgive me and for that I was grateful My tortured soul will be able to rest yet another night However you were foolish Forgiveness was never something you should have offered this creature For I am the villain I was born to be The fall out of every life I touch The fallout of the great bomb Disguised by the touch o...
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 She has been here before An old cabin nestled deep in the woods Away from the world A walkway, dusted with the first snow Sharp moonlight hangs overhead Filling the sky. Calming. Not an ounce of cold in her steps She moves forward casting a shadow over trees that stand tall Peering out into the darkness, cascading rays of light filling the ground Wondering closer, the warmth of the house radiates outside. A soft glow fills the windows Glancing at the night sky stars become beacons of ho...
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  For all of those who have ever wanted to live a life based on impulse, let me tell you, it's not all that it's cracked up to be. The "What if?" that plague's many is a question that is sometimes best left unanswered. While many great lessons are learned, and trust me, even better times are had, it usually ends with one thought, " What was I thinking?" Which is actually worse then the "What if" you could have been pondering late at night. "What was I...
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Non-fiction / In the orchard
Oh, this was so pretty and sad. I really feel bad for this tree. Great descriptions. Just a few minor things. "The best seat was to the left (if my back was toward the barn) about halfway up the height of the tree"- I don't feel I need to know it was if my back was toward the barn. "From this seat on could observe the goings-on"- one could observe But overall I enjoyed this!
The whole thing just seems rather shakey. Like I understand the point and the emotion behind what your saying but the format and wording I'm not a fan of. Keep writing, keep trying new things.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / NOPE!
Enjoyable! And I agree with your theory. "and all you do is smile and accept as fact" Something about this sentence bothers me, maybe the structure. I think it can be phrased differently
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / save humanity. stop insanity.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / 6 Letter Memoir
It's simple and to the point. However, there is so much you can add to this. While its a generally bold statement to have realized such a thing, the possibility to expand on this is almost limitless. Go for it!
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / save humanity. stop insanity.
Short Story / The Glass House

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