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AGE:
38
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 14
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 14
i can crawl
i can fly
i can kill
but never die
i can blink
though i have no eye
i am eternal
what am i?
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a familiar nostalgia I remember the palm trees dancing to nature’s beat and the violent serenity of waves and shore the gulls voice carried over wind and the perfect sky of that place I remember the soft curves of the dunes and the foam and fauna brought by the tide the wet crunching of sand underfoot and the moonlit path across the water I remember the refreshing newness of it all that excitement of being away from home and the gentle caress of anticipation which speaks to the senses of new ...
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Pimple I have a pimple in my dimple It makes me want to rhyme. I have a zit it hurts a bit But do you have the time ? To listen to this rhyme ? I say again Hey ! my friend do you have the time to listen to this stupid silly crazy lazy mixed up little rhyme. I have a sty it’s near my eye I don’t know how it got there. I have a bite it’s from a mite but I don’t really care. I have a toe it sometimes glows but only when I stub it. I have a gut and a butt but don’t let people touch it. I have a f...
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The Endless Sea pt. II I dreamt again another night that day stood still and time took flight Here it is, that dream again It never ends. It never begins. In the bay by the Endless Sea Where once was two, there now were three We came together in waves knee high And there I met Myself and I We meet again, this time as friends And we’ll meet again before the end And when we meet upon that day you other two will know the way “Leave me be,” my body said “I am not here. I am not dead.” “But one da...
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The Endless Sea While walking in the endless sea I see someone who looks like me He points his hand across the bay and nods to me as if to say “There’s something there inside that cave There’s something there you’ll want to save” He leads and so I follow him While light once bright is growing dim The cave inside is cold and wet Therein lie the treacherous get Begotten by those who are filled with spite Hiding in shadows, afraid of the light But lying there upon the stone a crumpled body all a...
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Awsome. i love the concept, has a ton of potential. You could almost base a sitcom on it. Man, keep working on this and do it credit. You know you aren't done with it yet.
What ? I just totally didn't get it. We're walking along and then what? I like the last line, but don't understand how you got there. Maybe i'm missing the context ?
This is a very interesting piece. It is perverse, states it upfront and is unapologetic about it. My hands are idle, I have become unpolished. That line made laugh. So naughty. I liked this one. It's pretty cool. I could see this published.
I read it twice, and still I don't get it. I like the immagery in the work, the lines themselves are well thought out and very vivid. I dont' agree with some of the content, like the part about righteousness; righteousness can't really be earned, i think it's a gift. I wish the writer here wouldn't try so hard to impress us with language, but would rather empasize clairity. To make a poem clear, simple, and expressive is harder than making a poem that is so deep and obsure that ppl can't unde...
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