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AGE: 36
LOC: Lancaster, KY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 20

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Poetry / Slovefest
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
Shadows of entering darkness fill the room, Liquid sheets of satin stain, and pain fills the womb, I like the taste of blood at breakfast, noon, and night, I like to pinch your hard nipples and watch your eyes fill with fright, I like to squeeze your ass cheeks so hard that each individual fat cell is pressed firmly against the next, forming a solid mass of hard ass, …But most of all, I like your smile, you kinky bitch.
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / My Life: One Womens Story of Abuse and Neglect
Version 2
8 Reviews   2 Comments
Hi, my name is Angel and this is the story of my life. Abused by men, addicted to drugs and tortured by my mother. I hope you enjoy dark and sinister shit because that’s the way I feel. I have managed to live to a ripe old age of thirty-four, my mother is dead and my three ex-husbands still want me back. As if. I am sure one of my ex-boyfriends is serving time for child-molestation. His name is Will, he is probably enjoying the prison life considering the fact that he used to pimp himself ou...
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Version 1
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Hi, my name is Angel and this is the story of my life. Abused by men, addicted to drugs and tortured by my mother. I hope you enjoy dark and sinister shit because that’s the way I feel. I have managed to live to a ripe old age of thirty-four, my mother is dead and my three ex-husbands still want me back. As if. I am sure one of my ex-boyfriends is serving time for child-molestation. His name is Will, he is probably enjoying the prison life considering the fact that he used to pimp himself ou...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / The Forgotten
Version 3
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Mary turned and walked back into the house thinking that she may just go upstairs and take a little nap. Her sister was not due in until six o’clock this evening. Misty was coming to stay with her for the summer. Her sister was a major writer who could take her work with her. Therefore, she accepted Mary’s invite for a visit. They were going to have so much fun she thought, as she fell asleep. Little did Mary know that tonight would mark the beginning of hell for both of them. As she napped,...
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Short Story / That's my man
Oh my God! I think this is too funny. I love it and I would love to read more. It seems as if you have a real talent. From reading only half, I feel as if I've stepped into your world. Great Job!
Poetry / The Door
I have read the Dark Tower books and I can identify this poem as relating to Roland. His is a path littered with many doors. Great Job! There's a nice flow to this poem making it easy to read.
Poetry / Pitch Black
I think it's hard to read this out-loud. My tongue gets tied up with so many pitch black's. The second paragraph is the one I'm talking about. Other than that, I think it's an original piece of work.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Poetry / Time To Go!
This is a creative piece of work. I liked it even though "put it all away. Quit looking in the mirror" left me a tad confused. All in all, good work.
Poetry / SNAP!!
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