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AGE: 19
LOC: Riverton, WY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 13

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Green Wave Facts
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I woke up at early. I was nervous. I sat on my bed, my stomach in knots. After a couple of minutes Maya knocked softly on my door and sat on my bed next to me. "Are you sure you want to do this?" She whispered. "I've never wanted anything more in my life." I whispered back. "Okay, well go take a shower then I'll help you get ready." She patted my knee and went to go take a shower in her room. When I got out of the shower, I smelled coffee brewing downstairs. Enchanted I drifted out of my bath...
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I always wanted to write in orange ink. I never did before now. I was always too shy. I’ve been too shy my whole life. Too shy to talk to boys, too shy to ask for help, and too shy to say I was sad. That was of course until today. I woke up at 5:30 and dressed into some black sweats and a white t-shirt, ready for the long weekend ahead of me. My little sister, Maya, was waiting for me in the living room. She wasn’t too shy. She had everything, beautiful deep brown hair, dark green eyes, a bod...
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I always wanted to write in orange ink. I never did before now. I was always too shy. I’ve been too shy my whole life. Too shy to talk to boys, too shy to ask for help, and too shy to say I was sad. That was of course until today. I woke up at 5:30 and dressed into some black sweats and a white t-shirt, ready for the long weekend ahead of me. My little sister, Maya, was waiting for me in the living room. She wasn’t too shy. She had everything, beautiful deep brown hair, dark green eyes, a bod...
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Flash Fiction / Gift Giving
WOW! Straight to the point! There's not alot of detail, which allows the mind to think for itself, and I love it! The word usage is very good and so is the way it progresses. I say keep it up!
Stage Play / Three Kings
It made me laugh. It also made me angry. I don't really see anything wrong with it except that Hank and Susan are a little too into winning. I like that there's not alot of stage direction, it gives the actors a little creativity in character development, as far as I'm concerned.
Stage Play / Because I love you
So he killed her and himself? There just isn't enough. It's a premise, but that's it. It's all just skin and bones. Both character are completly static, there is no emotion from either of them. More. You just need more.
Stage Play / Timmy Thompson is Dead
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Short Story / Citie
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