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AGE: 34
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 15

LAU THIAM KOK was born in Penang, Malaysia, in 1975. His studies include a Bachelor of Applied Arts at University Malaysia Sarawak (1996 – 1999), and an MSc in Digital Futures at the Institute of Digital Art and Technology, University of Plymouth, UK (2002 – 2003). He was a participant in the Breeze Scheme, BBC South West (2005). Participant in Artists and Curators Residency Programme, Plymouth Arts Centre from October 2006 to June 2008 while working as a freelance web designer in London, Bristol, and Plymouth. Currently a freelance web designer and occasionally an artist.

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Poetry / I cannot live with you
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I cannot live with you heaven is too high I cannot age with you you have forgone my years I cannot rise with you I must stay awhile for the journey you maybe here always with me in the air you have distinguished where I will find you someday 14.03.2009, 02:57 am, Sat
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Poetry / I don't age for time, I age for you
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When I am old and gray forgive me for not wanting to see you please remember my youthful face and remember these words I don’t age for time I age for you.
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Poetry / I don't age for time, I age for you
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When I am old and gray, forgive me for not wanting to see you, please remember my youthful face and my last words to you, I don’t age for time I age for you.
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Poetry / I Age for You
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Forgive me for not wanting to see you once more when I am old and grey, just please remember my face that when I was young and my last word that I don't age for time but for you.
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Quotes / Six-Word Momoirs: Simplexity
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I am Nature in butterflies' wings.
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Lyrics / Stop Your Wanting
by smartins11
'Stop Your Wanting' - so what does he want actually? it is not said and hinted in the line of this lyrical writing, so i think it is difficult for the reader to feel related to. also, it is difficult for me to imagine what kind of difficulty of the speaker with her spouse... I would use 'cuz' in any kind of my writing, i would use 'because' instead. the last stanza/ paragraph of this lyric seems to be redundant and over repeated to me. Try substantiating or exemplifying what the spouse really...
Poetry / The Rain, better known as Careless.
by astrodude15
i think this is a good idea with the theme of 'rain'. you have done enough describe the rain in many ways and lives, the only thing the lack the most, however, i think it is the 'drama' in this poem, for instance, the only drama that grips my attention in this poem is, "I am lost in the rain, breath slow and labored. I can feel myself free falling with them, Not caring where I land." but still, i think it is too brief and too short. maybe you could extend this drama from here. hope this is he...
Poetry / Undeterred
by TwentySeven
it is very cinematic, words a well written, i think it is a good writing even though i am not keen on the story itself of this poem... it just personal taste i think. however, i don't quite get this line actually "With hope only for a yesterday." should it be - With hope only for a tomorrow? hope is dealing with tomorrow, while memory is dealing with yesterday, i think. best, Lau
Quotes / Are You Willing
by Jimmel104
Yes I agree with you on that quote. A great love normallu against the odds. I wrote this sometime ago and I think this is what u tried to say in your quote, 'To love you In bad in good In all the hard times I will be there for you. And all, and all The ups and downs In life I risk for you I risk for you. To love you All weathers In shine in rain In breeze in storm I stand by you I stand by you. To love you I let you go For all your bliss Without me For all my tears Without you. 01.10.2004, 1:...
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Poetry / Desert(ion)
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