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AGE:
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LOC: Mililani, HI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 21
LOC: Mililani, HI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 21
My writing has been sporadic at best. I would write for a period of time then stop. These past couple years I’ve been going through a transition. My writing has evolved. My writing helps me. I hope that it’s changed into something that I enjoy as well as other people. I’ve never shared it to the world. I hope I will not be disappointed.
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If these scars could talk what would they say? Would you hear every word, or ignore them in every way? Would you laugh and say "Don't you cry, they are your life, no matter how you try." If these scars could talk would they show that I could not. Could you see the pain I've endured, denied the joy that I am well dued? Would you smile and say "It doesn't matter, it's not your love that I am after." If these scars could talk would you heed their words? For their marks upon my skin, tell of woes...
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The pond can never grow or shrink I wish to stay, I wish to think. I may go, I may remain For everything I hold in disdain. No bread have I found, no mate am I bound, My life as a duck it does stink.
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To Whom it May Concern, I wrote this note Not for you, not for me For my soul as it claims to be. I wish I knew how to say All the things I couldn't today. For tomorrow as you will see I will say no more utterly. So do not despair all I hold dear, I will see you when death draws near. And when we hold each other again, My life will be whole my friend.
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This was well written. The flow went well with the rhyme scheme. It read like a Bible story or fable. I thought the symbols were well thought out. Very nice work.
Very well written. Clear, concise, and complete. Keep up the good work.
A very interesting read. I'm not sure if I've ever read someone journaling someone else's life before. I believe that would be hard to do. It was very rhymthic, almost like a song. It seemed if this person was alone. I thought it was well done.
A very well done piece. I found the symbolizm to be very moving and poignant. Allowing yourself to be loved by another can open someone's eyes and ease a troubled soul. I thought you captured this view rather well. Excellent work.
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