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AGE:
39
LOC: Seligman, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
LOC: Seligman, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
New to the art of poetry, I am not looking to be published. I am looking to refine my skills and am using it as a way to express myself in a manner that is unlike the “normal” me :)
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Your piece is very well wrote. Although, I felt the need to google Federico = Federico Garcia Lorca. In s1L3 "words of dark love", why did you feel the need to only partially use english instead of an all spanish line? It puzzled me at first so once again I googled a spanish to english translator to find out what "oscuro" meant. Had I not enjoyed your poem, I would not have taken the time to do this.
A lot of emotion is evident in this poem. The use of "Scarlet Tears" is cliché and should be avoided. Interesting message. Good work
I appreciate the message here. Poetry is indefinable, I agree. Good job.
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