layla's profile

AGE: 53
LOC: Ashland City, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 06

I am an avid reader,and have been reading for pleasure all my life.I enjoy new talent,and there are some great talents here.I am not a serious writer,but at my son’s insistence,I am putting an old poem out for review.

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The lines in my face,or so I've been told, Are character lines,they won't make me old. The greys in my hair,or so I've been told, Are threads of wisdom,they won't make me old. The thoughts of my mind,or so I've been told, Are memory's song,they won't make me old. The aches of my heart,or so I've been told, Are the most damning,they will make me old.

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The lines in my face,or so I've been told, Are character lines,they won't make me old. The greys in my hair,or so I've been told, Are threads of wisdom,they won't make me old. The thoughts in my mind,or so I've been told, Are memory's song,they won't make me old. The aches of my heart,or so I've been told, Are the most damning,they will make me old.

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