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AGE:
29
LOC: Compton, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 12
LOC: Compton, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 12
Hi my name is Chrissy and I am a 27 year old who is still trying to find myself. I have been told I have many gifts and that I have an aura about me and I am just a warm and loving person to be around. I am learning that living outside your skin is better then being lost inside. I have a degree in Social Work that I earned just last May. I recently moved from a small rural area in Pa to suburbin Los Angeles. I know what was I thinkin right. I wanted a fresh start. I wanted a place free from all that was holding me back. Chains broken I can be the free spirit I am meant to be. I am a fallen angel I have fallen from grace many times and I know that I am not perfect but I refuse to be broken anymore so I am trying to find that middle groun…
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"Thicker Skin" the hurt and the pain penetrates deeper than I ever let on... I never want to admit the sobering truth Beyond the laugh lines are cracked deteriorating lines of pain... I walked on the pins and needles for so long I have fallen so many times trying desperately not to fall my soul bleeds.... the crimson tainted pain trickles down around me my heart cries... so many frozen tears but few seldom know.... of a past of lonliness and despair... I want to be whole.... yet.....bullet h...
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People continuously stare at this movie called Life... WE all have a part.. a vital role whether we want to or not.. Go ahead I dare you touch the screen Go ahead try to escape.. Just like the person next to you You have been sucked into this delusionary reality of a endless production It is a comedy of errors so many errors..... words of criticism make me a slave to a nation I wish I had no part of Why?! I ask myself why try so hard to please a compete stranger who will pass you and rarely r...
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Outta my head... Category: Life Thrown for yet another loop life can be so unpredictable a whirlwind of countless emotions spinning like lost ions in your head hammers fall crashing straight into my heart ice cold pellets of uncertainty.... I am outta my head.... detached from reality... numb to pain it aint no stranger to me.... bowing my head not sure of my thoughts right now I am outta my head...... there is so many words.... but nothing can describe mind numbing fear I clench my chest... ...
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This would be a great poem but for a song I think it is alittle to intense....the subject matter.... "People dressed in their church cloths..." you spelled "clothes" wrong here "I never saw through the insanity That I was liked and loved by so many" to dress this line up how about... I never could break through the insanity that was accepted and loved by so many... Just some suggestions good job overall I liked this..." "File by me with grace and respect Feeling like I am someone special Is t...
This was very engaging you use such good imagery in your writing her that it really pulls the reader in.. "I turn my tear-streamed face into the maddened bliss of red descending Letting crimson flows dissolve the salty stains of agony" I really liked this especially the "....salty stains of agony..." Wow that really depicts despair here "Consumed with so much hate for self, forgiveness cannot penetrate" instead of using "self" maybe use something that describes the hate.. For example maybe tr...
Wow I was amazed by how engaging this piece was. "The day is ending; a gold line of sunlight drenching the horizon of black hills in the distance" I loved the imagery given by this line to open the story! The word choice was amazing! I felt immersed in all of it! "When the dawn breaks, all of the souls have gone. Hel sits on her mountain of a throne, majestic and restful. She closes her great, joyfully sad eyes, and rests her graceful, huge hands in her lap. Someday I will see her again, but ...
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