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AGE: 35
LOC: Kosciusko, MS
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 24

I love to write. I work full time and go to college for nursing. I have 4 children. I would love to get discovered for my writings. I write mostly of my life I have had.

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Poetry / Prayer at sea
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In this sea of life, my ship has arrived to port picking up a sailor whom claims to bare the journey with me accross the rugged sea. He casts the sails and works to keep on course of sunset beyond.Enjoying the warm sun and all the riches aboard then, rugged ruff seas come about but instead of holding down the sails and standing beside me to bare the ruff journey, he goes below to the hole to hide like a stowaway rat, to let me bare the ravaging sea alone, all I can do is cry and keep hold to ...
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Query Letter / Query Letter
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Query Letter Murder, deception, travels, homeless, motherhood, drug dealing, school, and pursuit of a better life, these are my stories. The stories of a white girl tainted and imbrued by parents with violence, sex, and drugs; that found a sense of direction, love, and protection by drug dealers in the black community. Drug dealers have such a bad rap in the media but they are people too. I have come across some real ruthless ones, however; the few I’ve come across have been a positive role m...
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Non-fiction / WELCOME TO KOSCIUSKO
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Welcome to KOSCIUSKO A big city woman looking for a place to call home, my life seemed hopeless and tired of being a one person army. I found a friend over the internet his name was Larry. I have never done this before, therefore; the experience was new. I asked him where he lived he replied “Kosciusko, Mississippi”. I remember thinking to my self what a strange named city. Some months later, I had the opportunity to visit this strange named city and the man in it. As I drove on highway 12, I...
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Poetry / She Calls
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Good use of metaphors. The flow and meaning of this piece is well established. I think you have some talent. As a reader, I enjoyed this piece.
Either way, I was not able to follow this at all. The follow through from paragraph to paragraph seemed not to fit.I'm not into motorcycles which maybe the problem. Sorry, I just did not understand this piece.
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Poetry / Loving you
The word usage and flow of this piece is well put together. The meaning was clear and heartfelt. I truley enjoyed reading this.
Poetry / By Mine Own
I really did not understand this piece. The word usage was a little different. I get that this piece is talking about people never dying. I reads almost as if someone casting a spell or something.
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