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LOC: Chicago, IL
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Murder Calling 1st Chapter revised
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Creating chaos in my nearly perfect life. “Please don’t do this. I’m sorry. Listen to me.” Loud bangs carry through the house. “Listen to you. You got to be out of your fucking mind.“ “Baby let me explain. Stop this you are really blowing this out of proportion.” She grabs him by the hand and pulls him towards her and caresses his face. “Get your hands off me.” He snatches his face out of her hand. Pushing her towards the wall he presses his body on her and proceeds to take life from her. “ I...
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Novel Treatments / Murder Calling Chapter 2
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New life, Clean Slate. I stayed at a friend’s house after the big fight I had with my mom. Maria and I had been friends since I was little. We met at my elementary school and she was considered one of the outcasts. She was chubby had very oily hair and skin. She never really talked so one day I decided to approach her. We were at lunch and she was sitting at a table by herself so I came over to her table to sit next to her. We talked the whole lunch period and we had been friends since then. ...
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Waking up to the drizzle of a rainy morning, my head banging like a pulsating heart, I turn over and notice a face that is beautiful but unknown to me. “Did you sleep well,” the beautiful woman with green-grayish eyes and long blonde hair says as she turns on her back. “I slept alright. Ah man my head is killing me what happened last night?’ I ask. Very softly she says “Jennifer “Where did I meet you at?” I ask. “We met at Club Dynasty,” she replies while raising the band on her arm to consum...
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Novel Treatments / Murder Calling Chapter 3
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“Mom! Mom! Where are you ? Are you alright?” I scream frantically trying to find her. Its pitch black and I am unable to see anything in the house. “Mom are you here?” I ask looking around for her. Creeping through the shoadows, the mysterious stranger creaks on the hardwood floor. I turn around only to find a table shaking and vanishing into the night. I hear someone talking so I advance towards our basement door. I can feel the shadow creeping behind me. “ Mom you down there?” I ask nervoul...
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Creating chaos in my nearly perfect life, my phone rings and on the other side a voice takes away what I took for granted. Agonizing thoughts are crafted into my mind and I struggle to hang on to any reason to live the rest of my life. Disheartened, my father left earlier today hollering obscenities about how hard he works and how betrayed he feels. Now he’s dead. His death struck me deep in my soul leaving a scar on my heart that will never heal because it longs to be filled with the love on...
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Short Story / The Nunnery (Revised)
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Short Story / Rookie of the Year
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Novel Treatments / mea culpa
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Novel Treatments / Big O.T. (Chapter 4 amd 5)
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Short Story / Leave the Ghost At Home
This story is off to a very good start I love the Imagery that you use in this story and for a short brief moment you had me drawn into the story. Keep working at it and I hope to see more of it soon.
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