linzeroni's profile
AGE:
20
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 03
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 03
My name is Lindsay and I will soon be 17. I love to write, but have been having a lot of trouble with it lately. Writer’s block I guess you could say. I could sit for hours trying to think of something to write, but nothing comes to me. I am literally ‘blocked’. I can think of a great line or two, but when I go to expand it, I get stumped. It’s very discouraging, but I’m trying my hardest to get something done. Slowly but surely I’m getting back into my flow of writing. Hopefully I’ll be back to my old self again.
You can email me at
linzeroni@yahoo.com
Or instand message me on AIM at
loversgoboom
=]
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I found a spot on your chest where my head fit perfectly I laid there listening to your beating heart thumping against your chest. I’d never felt so safe before as I held you while you slept In that moment, as your heart rate slowed along with my racing thoughts time ceased to exist in that room, in that bed, there with you. And I realized that when I’m with you something changes inside of me- A fierce calm engulfs I feel a love for life that is so passionate and real I feel a lo...
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These stupid lines of poetry spew from my mouth whenever I think of you And let me tell you now I've got pages, and pages about you You're always on my fucking mind. And I almost wish it would stop. Why should I fall alone when it's so much safer to fall together? I just fucking want to be with you And for some reason it's making me angry. I'm so damn tired of things not working out for me. I'm so damn tired of trying, so tired of caring About the people who don't care about me All I wa...
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Halographic eyes against black paper skulls and purple colored lillies all covered in snow Showing no mercy to viewers of whatever age Understanding nothing other than the perfectionism performed by a former self, never knowing when to stop. Schoolbooks carried in hallways so blank pretty pink bow ties covering lies that we call 'promises'. Never has such a beautiful night seemd so cold in an age of true darkness. These halographic eyes shine in your pool of murky water, your ...
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You said you'd call So I'll wait and see This silence will be the death of me my head is spinning with anxiety But the truth just is; I want you. I have a feeling that my phone won't ring But I'll just wait here patiently I'll pretend it doesn't bother me But we both know It does. And you're out somewhere on the town And here I sit, stuck and bound I'm consciously filling my room with sound Ignoring how badly I want you And there's something about the way that you move...
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Dear self, I’m writing to you from a prison cell. I truly hope you get this. Would it be unbelievable if I told you missed you? You left so abruptly; I had no chance to even wave goodbye. What happened to the old you? The new me is here, rotting away, waiting to die. The last time I remember you was long ago. Your eyes shone bright and you laughed at yourself. I can’t laugh at myself now. You were so beautiful. Every boy wanted to hold your hand And now I’m old, sunken, grey. I’m nowhere near...
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This is great, especially since you say you are not a poet. Here's a few critisicms: There might be more to sunflowers than you think. When darkness etches into the light The sunflowers in the meadow transform into an eerie sight. you should maybe not use the word sunflowers in that last line. It's a little bit redundant and takes away from the feel of your powerful words. Also, it seems that the rhyming scheme may be a little bit forced. A poem does not have to rhyme to be beautiful. This l...
This is clever. I really love the double entendre. The poem flows very nicely and it's really creative. Nice work!
Wonderful. I loved this! It really gave me a sense of Euphoria. I want to know more. I like the way you laid it out.
I like the feel of this. However, I feel that when you use questions, it takes away from the flow of the piece. I really loved the line that said 'I am not an open book, I am a library unwritten.' That really stood out to me and I actually read it over to myself a few times. But, on the contrary, the line afterwards, 'Choose your own (but make it me) adventure to read', the parenthesis really takes away from it and pulls you out of it. For me, it made me stop for a minute and I had to figure ...
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