linzeroni's profile
AGE:
19
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 01
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 01
My name is Lindsay and I will soon be 17. I love to write, but have been having a lot of trouble with it lately. Writer’s block I guess you could say. I could sit for hours trying to think of something to write, but nothing comes to me. I am literally ‘blocked’. I can think of a great line or two, but when I go to expand it, I get stumped. It’s very discouraging, but I’m trying my hardest to get something done. Slowly but surely I’m getting back into my flow of writing. Hopefully I’ll be back to my old self again.
You can email me at
linzeroni@yahoo.com
Or instand message me on AIM at
loversgoboom
=]
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I laid down on the five inch thick plastic lined mattress, wondering how things went so wrong- I had completely hit rock bottom at 16 years old. The grueling day that was about to end replayed over in my head. There were no emotions inside of me anymore. All I could do was think, nod, and move on to the next thought. I was ashamed of myself for letting my young life get so out of my control that I had to strip myself of what little dignity I had left and be placed under constant surveillance....
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I puckered my lips and stared at my freshly made up face, ready for the night ahead of me. I was really nervous, but I was good at hiding it. Tonight, I was getting the man of my desire. The man I’d lusted over for over a year now. Tonight was the night that I would seduce him and make him mine for as long as I could have him. Yesterday was my 19th birthday. I had planned this out since the day I met him down at Finnigan’s. I had a dream that wonderful night, and I knew that the night after ...
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It's been one year since Sarah died. Something I'll never forgive myself for. Why is it that things so completely beyond someone's control are the things they get made fun of for? I never got the chance to know Sarah; I was too busy building my status with my peers to care. And now she's dead, the innocent one, while my brother, Jake and I are still here. Freshman year, I learned that Sarah O'Connell, a pretty girl in fact, moved to our huge state of California. She had pretty green eyes an...
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I am supressed I want to rip a hole through the earth and scream until I can't bare to utter a sound. I want to pound and cry and let it all go... I want to disappear into the depths of the universe. Not existing is better than living. I want to walk on the sun, until I shrivel up. Until there's no evidence of the person I was. I'm so good at remembering the things I wish I'd forget. And no one forgets the things I've said. So I'm trapped in the set of my horrible mouth. Memories hurt me. Wak...
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Humans... We're all animals. Pushing and shoving our way to the top, leaving the weaker ones behind. Our voices are loud and our actions are harsh we are all so quick to point the finger of blame. Humans... We are all the same Everything we do is filled with greed, with sin. We feel like we are helping but really, we're destroying. The power of the mind is so strong, doing anything for a tiny taste of power. Humans... All we want is love. We cry about it, write about it, sing about it, kill f...
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Wonderful. I loved this! It really gave me a sense of Euphoria. I want to know more. I like the way you laid it out.
I like the feel of this. However, I feel that when you use questions, it takes away from the flow of the piece. I really loved the line that said 'I am not an open book, I am a library unwritten.' That really stood out to me and I actually read it over to myself a few times. But, on the contrary, the line afterwards, 'Choose your own (but make it me) adventure to read', the parenthesis really takes away from it and pulls you out of it. For me, it made me stop for a minute and I had to figure ...
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I liked your thoughts and what you were trying to talk about, but the way it's written and the words you chose weren't the best. In my opinion, the one step from being a good piece from a bad piece is grammar, if that makes any sense. I guess what I'm saying is that if you're grammar was better, the piece would sound so much better. Some of the words you used weren't the best, and the way you would sometimes interrupt yourself or change thoughts seemed a little out of place. I hope this helpe...
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