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I picked passion. Now I'm poor.
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I do not believe that weed leads to a free mind, I know that a free mind leads one to weed.
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Evening symphony, a cricket and frog chorus, slowly fades with dawn
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The same scene I kick you Nudge you encouraging a closed mouth but you laugh in a riotous roar as she takes her walk of shame cause the lover's never the same she's searching for self worth in all the wrong places and you stand back watching always willing to give your two cents but never to give your attention in that loving sense.
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Molded together in a tangled embrace the pitch black cloaks us from the troubles of every day life of which we know many and the steady rhythm of our involuntary breathing screams out, breaking our silence accompanied by our hearts harmony Fixed pulses lull us into a dimension of peace rarely felt, but never forgotten a feeling of oneness seizes our souls no longer two separate beings but one perfected force In the shadows of life, in the darkness with you, I knew far too well our souls were ...
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This made me smile. I like the sentiment... I'm not sure if you're refering to writers block, or the fact that if you're published your name will exist forever, or if you're refering to chiseling out your feelings into words, but that's what I like about it, that it can be interpreted many different ways. Bravo... keep writing
I like this, but it falls flat if you've never heard of or read any Sylvia Plath. Luckily, I have...I like (and understand) the sentiment, as I often feel the same way, but it is somewhat of a downer. Overall, decent... keep on hanging on
I love this. I guess I love it a little bit more because I can relate to it...my first poem ever published in a lit. magazine was all about the act of writing. It shows the circular nature of the writing life, how we can never get enough, there is always something else to write about...and in our cases it's writing. Kudos.
Ah, such is life in America now, ever since those golden arches have been popping up EVERYWHERE. I'm not sure if you used "MacDonald's" on purpose, but I like the twang that it gives to the word everyone knows. I like the cause and effect demonstrated, as well as your enthusiastic tone... Even if maybe it's not something everyone could get enthusiastic about. :)
I like the first sentence, but the second is lacking something. It's a perfect idea though, that we all inhabit the same space, and we are all essentially on the same level as everyone else. I think I would mull over the second half a bit to find something more striking, that drives the point home more strongly.
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