littlered's profile
AGE:
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LOC: Plano, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 15
LOC: Plano, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 15
Hi! i’m 17 years old and i want to be a writer when i grow up. Which is like in a couple of years. I love meeting new people and i’m very energetic. Funny i just described myself as a dog. Well anyways i think my stuff is pretty good and i hope you like it. Enjoy. Bye.
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"It's raining." "Yes it is. " i reply. We stare out the window and watch the rain drops fall to the concrete and form puddles. It is cold. I hate the cold. But even now i am temped to run out and jump and play in the rain. I like the sound that cars make as they drive through the puddles. Everything looked so sad and boring. Maybe it was because the sky was grey and depressing, or maybe because everything was actually grey and depressing. Oh how i miss t...
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She was the girl that I betrayed. I befriended her for a story, and what a hell of a story it was. I would make millions, and now looking at her dead with a dagger through her heart, I realized I had destroyed what was left of her life for my own amusement. Her open eyes glazed over with death, pierced into my heart like the dagger in her own. Metaphorically speaking of course. The long locks of her golden hair lay spread on the ground wreathing the cold terrified face of the girl I used, as ...
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pop the cheap champene we're going down in flames.
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-I hate when your at school and they (and by they I mean teachers) tell you to get off your cell phone and not more then two seconds later they are on theirs. -I hate it when people make noise when they eat. Honestly is it really that hard not to make little moaning noises like your making love while you’re eating??? Save it for the bedroom! -I hate going to the bathroom in public places because of this 1. You have to wait in a really long line 2. When the line starts to move and you get a li...
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I really enjoyed reading this story. My favorite part about your story is the lingo that the characters seem to have. And how your main character is obsessed with those old hollywood movies with their lingo and the romance and how he likes to pretend that he is actually in one. This is a very interesting story, not one that alot of people write about so i also thougt it was very refreshing. very good job.
i really really liked it! i wish there was more to read, i wasnt ready to stop! i love how colorful and detailed it was. and i love how emotional you made each of the characters. good job and keep it up. can't wait to read the next chapter!
Wow it is very dark and morbid. i dont know much about poetry but i did like it. it gave me the chills. i also am wondering what did the person get charged guilty for?
I really liked it. I think my favorite part of your little short story is that it's all from the bad guy's point of view. we hear his thoughts and his struggles. i also love how real your characters are. but i wish i knew more, who is the council? and what are they the council of? are they all wizards? what is the baby's name? Keep writing! i want to see what happens next.
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