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AGE:
25
LOC: Lockwood, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 26
LOC: Lockwood, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 26
I am 25 years old. I am engaged to a wonderful man. Altogether we have 5 kids who are my life and my world. I am a very artistic and outgoing person. I love life and try to make the most of it.
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Somebody, help me please. I do not see, what everyone else sees. I just do not understand how somehow this strange man has now become my “daddy”. But they say that he is. So sadly, I sit and wait for an explanation, and all I feel is hurt, anger, and frustration. I had a good daddy and did not need another. I do not understand this decision of my mother. Oh, it hurts so bad. I want to see my brothers, my sister, and my dad. I got to see them all the time. They were a family and ...
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This is a good piece. It deeply described the mourning of a loved one. You went to great detail explaining her sorrow, which alot of time people leave out those little details. I can't think of a way to improve it. It is wonderful.
I wouldn't exactly call it poetry, but it is a start. Elaborate on it and work on the rhyme. Maybe go into more detail about the situation. Like you said, it's a start.
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