liz_chenault's profile
AGE:
25
LOC: Lockwood, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 12
LOC: Lockwood, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 12
I am 25 years old. I am engaged to a wonderful man. Altogether we have 5 kids who are my life and my world. I am a very artistic and outgoing person. I love life and try to make the most of it.
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Somebody, help me please. I do not see, what everyone else sees. I just do not understand how somehow this strange man has now become my “daddy”. But they say that he is. So sadly, I sit and wait for an explanation, and all I feel is hurt, anger, and frustration. I had a good daddy and did not need another. I do not understand this decision of my mother. Oh, it hurts so bad. I want to see my brothers, my sister, and my dad. I got to see them all the time. They were a family and ...
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This really made no sense to me at all. There is no focal point, so I was unable to determine what it was supposed to be about. The rhyming itself was good, but you need to express more of what it is supposed to be about.
I really enjoyed this. With our sociaety these days most people try to avoid subjects like this and pretend they don't exhist. But you put it right out there and I loved the fact that you included the reason she was cutting and showed that it was like an addiction and not just for attention. I loved the choice of words. Keep up the good work.
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