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AGE:
22
LOC: Wedowee, AL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 28
LOC: Wedowee, AL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 28
What could I say to help others understand me and my writing.
I am new to writing. Just a child in the world of literature. I have no great education,nor have I had the privilage of reading famous poets writings. I try to show myself in everything I do. Being diffrent than most..my writing can come out a bit odd,and make some wonder “why?”. However writing is my passion,and the fact I don’t have any extensive poetry writing/reading experience. I may not be diffrent after all. In the end I hope all who read my work. Can tell i’ve placed alot of love..if not alot of time..in writing them. Each one has true deep meaning to me,and I hope I succeed in bringing that meaning to you.
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Eyes are downcast, at the ground atlast. The days coming to an end dusk has to begin. Mind is spaced, thoughts continue to race. I sit knee's to chest as I retrace our souls place. I fight what it brings with every fading dream. Feet are froze, in defiance they are posed. Realization of all I lost, when memory dances across. Hearts are singing, onto your memory my soul keeps clinging. Hands are trembling, as anger starts kindling. Forming a fist I refuse the cold numbing bliss. Mouth is start...
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Eyes are downcast, at the ground atlast. The days coming to an end dusk has to begin. Mind is spaced, thoughts continue to race. I sit knee's to chest as I retrace our souls stasis. Hearts are singing, onto your memory my soul keeps clinging. I fight what it brings with every fading dream. Feet ais frozen, in defiance they are posed. Relization of all I lost, when memory dances across Hands are trembling, as anger starts kindling. Forming a fist I refuse the numbing bliss. Mouth is starting t...
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Deep in the town hall, Of a city called misery. Where we all once visited, after a living catastrophe. Heartbreak Anonymous, the place lost lovers stay. A place without bliss, Only loneliness at play. We find them in silence, and understand truely. Why they speak not, of lifes cruel foolery. So they choose to not leave, As they sit and muse. Not afraid of you or us. Just afraid,to again lose.
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The tremble of your lips Only reflected by the tears on the edge of my own eyes.. I peer into yours searching for something, anything to fill in the void of a hopeless dream Wayward in my own finding, unwanting to accept. Yearning to keep this; You're what I wish to of kept.. The emptiness of air. It unshifting even with A deep breath,in an attempt to fill this chasm,this pit Leaving me wanting.. and begging for more,or for less asking myself what is this for is it truth..is it a test When yo...
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You wish me to say what. You are a friend who's a stranger. You say you smile now. You say we are trivial. You have eyes and they tell diffrent. You have masks and they are translucent. You cannot deny the pain. You swear it was purified in the rain. You choose an angry disposition. You make it easy to see in this transition. You show your feelings contrast. You are weak at last. You are not invulnerable. You are not invicible. ------------------------------------------- I am not your enemy. ...
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It truly doesn't. However when something isn't broken don't fix it. As well as don't go for the bird in the bush when you have one in hand. You seem understanding seeing both sides.
Lol I like it to the point in which. I find humor almost. It's interesting and how all of us night owls wouldn't mind that. Deeper then that it can have many meanings. Very nice.
Hmmm...Me too!! Maybe we are one in the same as quantum physics says eh? PLEASE!
It was definatly humorous. Nice peice,though you threw me off track. You had alot of fantasy then jumped from that to standing in underwear. Try and keep it within visualization. Jumping from dream to reality is a hard smack inbetween sometimes.
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