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AGE:
29
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 03
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 03
I’m single, charming, funny and SOOO not arrogant (insert snickering here). I am a constant work in progress, and will never, ever, be finished. I’m an extroverted introvert, and a talkative listener. I love studying human nature, and am on the continuing quest for truth, justice, and not being put down by “The Man.” I hope to someday learn the meaning of life, and figure out why women wear high heels even though it HURTS LIKE CRAZY! (or so I hear…)
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Live life, write now. Apologize later...
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KT Tunstall screams from the Bose in the bedroom - Mabel applies Maybelline with deft hands, performing a routine so old hat it's Gucci new "Let's Go! We're gonna miss the movie!" Tom loves his previews, and wonders for the zillionth time why he must endure the sacred ritual of "getting ready to go" Mabel's reply: Shelby-rose Revlon lips, liquid Clarin lushness, and Chanel No.5 - Tom can't resist to taste her kiss "Honey, we're late" "No... we're not gonna make it."
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Phone rings, brushing teeth - Spit out paste, pick up in time to hear dial tone...
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"Versatility", an Asian trait - just don't ask them to pronounce it.
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Hard to stray on the straight and narrows, wait, I meant - In the queue, straight-conform listless patience wearing thin and shout of "new queue open" springs the mob forward - damn, I was next, but now I play the patron saint of second-guessing HOLD ON! spread that Blow even, I don't like my ROWS in my ROWS! If it's mixed, it's not rows now, IS IT? Pride in getting high, precision the key to ecstasy Gave a lift to my wife's best friend blonde, perfect tan, perfect 10 her hand lingered on my...
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Direct and poignant, "Fizzle away germs" both physical and visual. Can feel the torment from the words, nicely done... ;)
Love the heat in the first stanza, Jutting petulantly through the space Where glass should have been If the air-con was alive and kicking. Those lines stick with me the most. The sencond stanza feels more like something that can stand on its own, but I enjoy the verse break all the same... ;)
Strong points in the phrasing - To this impasse, love doesn't last - that is a very strong line. I think that's why I believe in agape more than what passes for love these days... ;)
Fits criteria to a "T", I like the image going on in my head with this... ;)
A little confusing between lines 1 and 2 - maybe some images in the middle so that we can see "How god has helped." Unconventional, and that's not easy... ;)
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