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AGE:
22
LOC: Mc Kenzie, AL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 22
LOC: Mc Kenzie, AL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 22
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An actress playing the part so well… To outline the features of her soul… Look in those eyes… And see a need of want and change… Pools of tears spilling around the edges… Feel the aspects of human nature... Let them dissolve into skin… Bury animosity and rise above… Linger along the shadows… Be filled to the brim with regret… The sacrifice is chosen… And the blade lingers… Does redemption allowed to be served? One too many questions… No amount of crying changes your mind… Hesitance and resist...
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Your words burn holes in my heart… Cutting the deepest layer… Bleeding freely… Can't you see? I'm slowly dying… Tears etching scars into my face… Rivers of pain to course and flow… The designer of my pain… The walls are breaking down in me… No defense to the bruising… Can't you see? I'm slowly dying… You break me down… We both know… No fairness is allowed… The wounds won't seem to heal… Can't you see? I'm slowly dying…
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You've covered many of the usual themes in writing and brought them out in a seamless fashion. Personally, I love the way the mask was spoken about and the misdirection of steps. It's harsh, honest, and well written because of the factors. I'll look for more of your work to read.
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Yes, you can always find someone uglier than you in Wal-Mart. Never fails.
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The line, "an obsessed Pollock canvassing the lake in color", grabbed my attention. Pollock is one of my favorite artists, so I was able to get a clear image. The choice of words to convey the imagery are perfect. I can almost hear the noise from the doe running away.
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