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For hiding his eyes from the masses, My senator wears tinted glasses. This gives me a fright! My senator might See voters as rose-colored asses.
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The earthworm has no way of knowing Just whether he's coming or going. So which is it, friend? Your front or your end? Just which pair of cheeks are you showing?
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Without feeliong that I am comptent to review this sensibly, I feel that there are some lines that provoke some thoughts similar to some that course occasionally through my mind. I do think that the last stanza tends to get "sexy", and seems out of character with the preceeding lines. Maybe I'm mistaken. I find it impossible to enjoy lack of punctuation in a poem. Am I old-fashioned? What on earth is gained by omitting the punctuation? Can you earnestly believe that the lack of pronunciation ...
I judge that this is your philosophy, and that you reject all criticism of it. I pray to all the Powers That Be that you don't take a notion to dislike me.
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