I judge that this is your philosophy, and that you reject all criticism of it. I pray to all the Powers That Be that you don't take a notion to dislike me.

Without feeliong that I am comptent to review this sensibly, I feel that there are some lines that provoke some thoughts similar to some that course occasionally through my mind. I do think that the last stanza tends to get "sexy", and seems out of character with the preceeding lines. Maybe I'm mistaken. I find it impossible to enjoy lack of punctuation in a poem. Am I old-fashioned? What on earth is gained by omitting the punctuation? Can you earnestly believe that the lack of pronunciation ...