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AGE:
34
LOC: Fort Stewart, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 15
LOC: Fort Stewart, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 15
I just want to write and read others work and get better at my writing. I write all kinds of poetry and when I write erotic poetry it is not a come on to anyone, just an expression of myself. So, no nasty comments please. Other than that, I am married to my soul mate who has been in the Army for 8 years. I love art and do some of my own mixed media from time to time. I love words. My heros are my husband and the women in my family and the strength they show me everyday is astounding.
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My sanity faltered easily today, love. Your oceans of smiles watered my thirsting soul. It had been drained by eye. Sinking, swallowed by they. Them, the love I feel for free. Cater to me honey. I am alone. I am a child here, adult no more just now. And love resounds powerfully. Can you touch this screen again? And smile love, and light your eyes again? Ahh, my chest breathes wide, I sigh. You, my angel burden me not. You, take the load from my heavy head. Tears stream sweet relief. And love ...
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send me a million tiny drops of water i've lost my way it's too grey and rainy and i will stay here to go there in that sickness will be a betrayal upon my soul and surely endanger my life my sanity is slipping into a velvet purple-grey abyss i can not stop the fear or anger i go into my cave and will to become the water we run to dive in tears in the cold have no shoes but they have hearts that belong to others who cry lonely in the desert wind cold and strong i miss him
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I think I should sketch a painting today. One of my soul lone since you have away. Depicting the red around my head hung; and low my eyes fall my love. Heavy my feet had stood and stand. No breath comes to tongue. In this painting I shall be cold, twisted, and smothered. In this painting I am too cold to dream of you. Crushed also in velvet blue.
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I think I should sketch a painting today one of my soul lone since you have away... describing the red around my head hung and low my eyes fall my love heavy my feet had stood and stand no breath comes to tongue in this painting i will be cold twisted and smothered In this painting i am too cold to dream of you. crushed velvet blue
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I think I should sketch a painting today one of my soul lone since you have away... describing the red around my head hung and low my eyes fall my love heavy my feet had stood and stand no breath comes to tongue in this painting i will be cold twisted and smothered In this painting i am too cold to dream of you.
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This makes complete sense and it is adorable as hell. I love the rhyme and rhythm of this. Great work! Thanks for the smile it gave me this morning.
The imagery here is beautiful. Though I have to say that the story is hauntingly sad. I love how equated your mind to that of the power and strength of rivers. This is well written and I have no constructive criticisms. I thoroughly enjoyed the whole piece. Great write!
This is absolutely outstanding for you to have written this when you were only 16! I can see that even then you had a gift. I love the story line here of the steed being the collective human emotion of anger, fear, whatever might make up a nightmare or any sort of negativity. Outstanding write.
Beautiful yet riveting imagery! Thank you! I want to go on a ride now, though i don't own a Harley and my husband is in Iraq. I should love for us to ride. This seems almost haunting as though this may be their last ride. Great write!
Yes, I know this feeling. I understand this message it is clear and true. Love this. Wonderful Haiku!
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