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LOC: Alameda, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 08
LOC: Alameda, CA
GEN: Male
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I’m totally done with you now And if you want to know how I really can’t say. But from the start of today, I just want to stay away From everything that makes me think about you. I’m tired of feeling blue So I just want to forget But we’ll both be hurt from this, I bet. I just don’t know how we can go on With you just “missing me,” I feel like you’re just gone From me and my heart Flying away like a speeding dart To pierce the heart of someone else. I should move on and forget about it But it...
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This hurt I’m feeling Is genuine loneliness. I miss you so much that I cry But the tears just flow by and by Not reaching anywhere. You never stop and star What you’re doing to me The pain I have just won’t flee. I regret everything bad that I did to you, I wish I could take it back and show you my love is true. I doubt you still love me back Because I know you desire a lot of things that I lack. I want to do everything I can so we can stop this hate But I’m afraid that this time it’s too lat...
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This poem is so dark, but I really enjoyed the mood because it captivates the heart of your feelings.
I really enjoyed the story. You have a lot of talent. Keep writing
This poem is great, I really feel the emotion and the strength of the words being said, because I feel exactly the same way about the person you're speaking to.
I think the poem grasps its purpose, but I think that delving into specifics would make it a bit better, giving it a nice finish.
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