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AGE: 15
LOC: West Des Moines, IA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 09

My name is Maggie Martin, and like most people on this site, I’m a voracious reader and writer. I enjoy being inspired by music (both by listening and playing) and letting that inspiration lead me to my writing. I’ve lived in Iowa my whole life, but no where near any farms. (I’m a subburb kind of girl.) My favorite place in the world is New York City, and am also quite inspired by it. Feel free to comment my work. As of now, it’s just for fun, but hopefully someday one of my pieces of work will amount to something.

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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Imaginary Hell (Preface/Chapter1)
Version 1
7 Reviews   5 Comments
  Preface A small hand closed around mine. Unfortunately, I knew what was coming next. “But Hunter, you can stay with us,” I begged, “Forever.” “Corley, you don’t know what you’re saying or committing to.” The disappointment must have been very clear on my face, “You two are only ten years old.” “We’re old enough to know when we’re being abandoned.” Grahm’s words were sharp in the silence. &ldqu...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Guiding Angel
Version 1
7 Reviews   8 Comments
Guiding Angel By: Maggie Martin Chapter 1~ Accidents When I was growing up, I was always the good kid. I was always the one that other parents would look at and wonder what my parents did to create such a perfect child. My GPA was never below 4.0, and my permanent record was completely flawless. Church was a weekly must for my very catholic family. Every Sunday, the Asher family was sitting at the primary spot in the front row. Father Gibbons came over to our home on a regular basis while my...
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Young Adult / BLACK MAGIC - Chapter 4
by Anonymous
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Young Adult / Bonds of Fate Book 1: Golden Sky CH 1
by Elle_Johnson
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Short Story / The Game
by CiannaSkye
This was definitely very interesting- I've never seen anything like it on here! I really enjoyed it! It was very much like an actual video game, but I liked the personal touches you were adding between the people who were playing the characters too. I looked for errors along the way, but since you said this was your second version, I didn't catch any. (Or I could have just been to invovled in the story!) Anyway, I really think you should get this published in some form. I know a lot of gamers...
Poetry / The Girl with the Long Auburn Hair
by Alex_Bruinekool
This is very heartfelt, and I really loved the connection that I felt right away. You are instantly drawn in when you speak of the girl with the auburn hair, and then the tale of her life and tragdy makes you feel for her. It broke my heart that she died, I was hopping that maybe they would have worked it out. Overall, I very much liked it. There was just one small error that I caught: 'I was dissapointe,'- dissapointed
Action Adventure / Relatively Superhuman: Chapter 1- UNUSUAL ABILITIES (Version 2)
by Hypernormal
I really really like this! I loved how you seeped in only a little bit of information at a time so that it kept me reading to see you he had killed his wife. This verison is grammatically flawless (I was really into it, so I might have missed something) and I thought that you didn't over-kill on being discriptive. There was just one sentence that I think sort of ruined the flow towards the end: "I hated tragedies too. And what was the point in my being trained to protect and to kill, and to i...
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