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AGE: 19
LOC: Camp Dennison, OH
GEN: Female
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Short Story / Basyah
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Her hands were shaking, trembling from the usual ritual of violent acts. No matter how many times, no matter how many slaps, the same terrified shakes that rack her whole body, seemed to submurge. Quietly sitting in the dark corner of her desolant room she would cry. Tears streaming from the sides of her eyes, to slowly make their way down her soft and innocent face. A face that had taken so much torment, beating, and scornning. Now a face that boar the evidence of unforgivable sins, and that...
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this was wonderful. you really have a way with words =] it gives my stomach a gut feeling when i read this...it makes you think deep and hard about somone you care about or have cared about or someone you could possibly care about this much someday.. nicely written kudos
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I understand this totally :)
I thought that it was very well written and I think you really have a talent. Dont give up. I think you have the patential to be a great and very influencial writter. You drew me into your story into the characters and everything. Good Luck :)
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