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Afterword What can I but enumerate old themes? W.B. Yeats This homage to myth and poem grew out of Homer’s Odyssey. Some parts are translation, some parts are adventures upon which Homer is silent, some parts are pure invention. It aims to retell the whole life of the hero, up to a point, for confessions are always works in progress. For those who wish to follow Odysseus back to Ithaka, go to Homer and read from Book VI on and he will take you home. And though the machinery by which the tale ...
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This is an excerpt from Odysseus-The Epic Myth of the Hero, a novel length, narrative poem by Marc Ladewig, published by Infinity Publishing,com. Odysseus has left the isle of Calypso and been shipwrecked by the sea god Poseidon. He swims for three days and nights, musing on his life. He goes back to a time long before the Trojan War. His father Laertes sends him abroad upon an embassy to Sparta. Along the way, he meets his future wife Penelope for the very first time. “This said, I sailed fo...
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This is an excerpt from Odysseus-The Epic Myth of the Hero, a novel length, narrative poem by Marc Ladewig, published by Infinity Publishing.com. Odysseus has been held captive upon the isle of Calypso for seven years. Zeus has ordered the goddess to free him. Odysseus bids Calypso farewell. Then Calypso, shedding tears as though she were a human woman, spoke these anguished words, “You only feel a prisoner here because you will not bend and be my loving equal, wielding deathless powers over ...
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These are the opening lines to a full length narrative poem titled “Odysseus-The Epic Myth of the Hero” by Marc Ladewig, published. by Infinity Publishing.com. Sing about that long lost man for me, dear Muse of epic song, about that man who sacked the sacred citadel of Troy by means of cunning mind when force of arms failed, whose journeys pushed him far and wide to distant shores beyond the ken of wise men of his day, who sought to win homecoming for himself and dear companions, but ended up...
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This is the preface to Odysseus-The Epic Myth of the Hero, a novel length, narrative poem by Marc Ladewig, published by Infinity Publishing.com. Take a cup of your sweet favorite O Be Soulful. Wet your lips and read this tale aloud to kith and kin or by yourself to break the glowing silence with a song. You know this myth by heart; the start, the run, the end. The hero here is modern down the ages though he lived one hundred lives ago in ancient Greece. His woes in wave and war could be your ...
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It think you hit the nail on the head with this line, "if the villain can become a hero." That seems like a worthy goal a noble aspiration Appeals to yuck are like profanity or money or sex They attract quickly and just as quickly repel unless handled with great delicacy or with some profound insight Personally I don't like to relate to intimate relations in terms such as those employed in this poem Intimacy is a haven from the duress of the daily grind and art also a haven I do not go to art...
The good thing about this piece is that I kept reading to the end. I wanted to see how things would go. I wanted to know if I would develop some sympathy for the protagonist. But I was constantly nagged by a plausibility issue. This is told after all, by someone, "as I lay dying." (I don't know if that was a conscious reference to William Faulkner or not), so the narrator is speaking to us as a disembodied spirit. I think there is too much of the ER in this story. I think we see enough of tha...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Five Things I Hate About Life
I'm sorry I'm one of those sunny optimists that you despise Having traveled far adventured deeply lived through war zones tended sick loved ones and lost friends to cancer I find optimism is always justified and of great survival value I have found that the people who've been though the most in life are the ones who value optimism the most may I suggest a wonderful book man's search for meaning by victor frankel he was a jewish psychiatrist who was put in a nazi concentration camp and he wrot...
Poetry / Broken Hearted
what happened to the ending? i liked this poem very much "brown rooted mother" nice, concise image "shades found in a fruit basket" is another one "memories fresh as a violent wind striking his face" is yet another i also like the way it displays on the page i can't offer any improvements here you are obviously well along in writing poems you have a strong inner voice going you just have to read and read and read it yourself listen to how it sounds good to you but "it was the" ???? typo? effe...
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reaction??? i want an banana split, hold the nuts!!!!
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